Reviews for Ghost Story
BrittanyW1122 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
This is really good. Hope you right more!
Liluthien and Sador chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Cool! We got to do the same thing in History! You did a great job, I love your writing!
perfidiouspink chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Hello there! I have read this book for a uni lecture. I loved the idea of Grey Town, lots of creative writing possible with that setting. May I ask what school year you read this in? The story itself was sort of weak, it was interesting to see the ghost's lack of enthusiasm for the afterlife but I was confused about the narrative perspective, as well as who the spirit was addressing (at one time it's Riley, in another its Jenny). This Jenny/Riley ghost is really a closed-off static character eh? Anyway, cool writing excercise I think it would be fun to write about that particular literary world as well :)
Thalion King's Daughter chapter 1 . 1/9/2007
Not bad. It actually sounds a bit like what Lewis wrote. I too want to hear what the spirit says to the "bushy haired ghost"!

Good job.