good story. enjoyed reading it

I enjoyed the story.

Beautiful writing style, one of the best portrayals of contradiction and obsession that I’ve read.
It’s a talent to have fleshed out Hidan’s character through Temari’s perspective so well, expressions and reactions gave subtle layers.

I loved Kakuzu’s scenes that belayed chemistry and explored their dynamic through simple conversation, but found both Gaara and Kankuro to be one-dimensional and able to skip as the dialogue predictably served the purpose of ‘concerned sibling’ most times. Good reads & sequel would go crazy!

Insane end, thanks for writing

What a bizarre story, and I don’t mean that offensively. It just makes ya feel strange when you really dive into it, lotta heavy emotions from Temari

Damn, was hoping we would get a reenactment of hidan's dream this chapter. Even more sad this work of art is over. I FULLY agree with another reviewer, if you ever come back I would willing pay for more content. Your writing is so effortlessly entertaining and easy to read which is so rare to find. Genuinely thank you for making this

The baby come back line had me laughing hard. then tension between temari and hidan is EVERYTHING

hey, dear firefly! i'm rereading your work as ive said on my last review and how in the hell i'm allowed to read such amazing stories for free? i've been reading your stuff since i was a teenager, back in 2011 lol if you are still alive and well, i suggest you to create a patreon account or something bc lemme tell you something: you still got a lot ot fans and many of them are very willing to pay for your amazing work. you are such a talented writer, i cant stress that enough. anyway, i'll be thinking of you and waiting for your return! be well!

wonderful… just wonderful…

Fuck this is good

I have an unhealthy obsession with death and psychological fuckery, and thoroughly enjoyed this fanfic!

Wow. Re-reading after YEARS is crazy. Wow. What an experience. You certaintly had (have) a beautifil gift.
I remember the first time I tried to read this fanfic. I was a kid lol and could barely understand english (not my mother tongue). Had to use Google translate to read it. Lol To show how bad I wanted to read this history. And now... I can understand every line you wrote and love even more. I guess because of your writing Hidan became my favorite male character from Naruto (Temari was always my favorite lol). Anyway, hope you're ok, Firefly. I just wanted tou to know that tou writing really left an impression on me even to these days.

Good god two chapters in AND IM IN LOVE the writing is perfection the conversations amazing I just can't stop gushing over them wwwwwaaaat

I was 14 when i first read this fanfiction. I remember being completely intrigued and even now I am. It has been five years, yet i keep visitting this fanfiction again and again, and feeling different emotions whenever I open this up. I went ahead and read all of your other stories. You're a brilliant writer.
Thank you for all the tears, anticipation, shock, dread, smiles, and laughters. I hope you found happiness in your life.

This is dark, crazy, and twisted... And I love every part of it. I really like the portrayal and insight to Hidan. The obsession between Temari and Hidan was written really well. This piece made my heart race and made me think.