|Reviews for What The House Elf Saw|
| Alifromnm chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
Wow! Loved the chapter. This was written like the romances I used to read in my young adulthood! Wow!
| JaneA0202 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
it was really good! Though I dont know If Severus really felt something for her or he hates her and was only teasing her. I think this could have more chapters, the plot is good.
| Louie chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Hmmm. Different from other stories I've read, not in the content but how it was written. I enjoyed the story as a whole but it was written strangely 'and here we must forgive...' it reminds me of Lemony Snicket's 'A series of unfortunate events'
| sregner chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Hopefully they get on the same page
| pobrediabla chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
so how did you go, you ask?
perfectly. (wow, indeed)
| Teal chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
I love the play on the old standard line: "What the butler saw". There was a little too much archness in the introduction...you might have trimmed a bit...but when you got to the actual encounter, your dialogue was just bang on! This is probably the fifth time I've read this over a period of about a year and it still makes me smile. Well done. Thank you!
| Evelyns Journey chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
GR you should write more of this! NO ONE SHOT! NO I SAY!
Please? You're killing meh!
Good work -
| Regine Manzato chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
My first step into this pairing. How did I go?
How did you go? this story was AMAZING!
I loved it!
poor Dobby, never again he would stop to take care of his duties *lol*
| RavenEcho chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
You went well. Very, very well.
I liked how you wrote the perspective; it was an interesting twist. Other than that, I don't know what to say, just that I love it.
| RevQ chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
WOW! I loved it!
An excellent first step into this pairing :D :D :D
| TheBoltShapedScar chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
A lor more IC than the other Hermione/Snape. Wonderful! You described the love/hate relationsship perfectly!
| Lithium Choker chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
"How did it go?"
Bloody fantastically. Wonderful.
| villafoo chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
Heya, i really really really enjpyed this. I would so love for you to write more HG/SS fics D
| LittleWhisper chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
very well done! more! More! MORE!
| JL Light chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Bravo! I enjoyed this fic tremendously. As a one-shot of a rather difficult pairing (though I absolutely adore HG/SS *sigh*), the approach you took made for a very entertaining read, avoided trite scenarios (Dobby and a laundry baskey - a very nice touch indeed), and managed to leave most holes filled. The only suggestion I would make is to be aware of over-indulgence with the narrative voice in the beginning - though it was consistent, so I guess it really wasn't that big of a deal. Kudos to you, nicely done!