|Reviews for Moments in Time From the Grand Line|
| Urainium235 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
God it's taken me ages to re-find this little story, I was cursing myself for not adding to my favorites the first time I read it. A very nice little snippet and what was honestly a very impressive guess considering what was happening back them in 2007! I honestly LOVE the ending to chapter 1 and was really pleased to discover a chapter 2 :D
| Bubaloo chapter 2 . 10/31/2010
I cant believe how well you write! You really have a talent for the thing! Both chapters were very well written and very interesting, and do u really think Nami and Luffy are going to end up together? What about Boa Hancock with Luffy? I heard the Eiichiro Oda, when questioned about Nami's future relationships stated that it would be with someone outside the crew since One Piece is a manga for young boys who dont like romance like girls do, but he could always be deceiving us to think that way so that Nami and Luffy can be together without everyone knowing. Anyways, im looking forward to more One Piece-like chapters.
| Black-Bloodend chapter 2 . 6/22/2009
Keep it Up
I lIked it
keep on writing this story
| ShiroSakuraTenshi chapter 2 . 1/2/2009
did you know there was brook the skeleton of the StrawHat Crew?
| jcogginsa chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
| Darth Hawk 32 chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
| Raven the Ravenous chapter 2 . 12/23/2007
You astounded me with this chapter. It is interesting that the technique you theorized Dragon would teach Luffy was to control his 'spirit'. Then again...after seeing Shanks knocking down row after row of Whitebeard's crew...there is no reason why Luffy wouldn't be able to do the same? I love how you did the battles. White Out Grand Twister, I can definitely see Smoker using an attack like that! Well, now I'm not one to annoy people but: YOU. HAVE. TO. UPDATE. ASAP! :D Don't leave me hanging!
| Raven the Ravenous chapter 1 . 12/23/2007
Well well, the 'implied' LuNa at the end, not bad, I like it. I like how you had theories about the meeting with Dragon. Teaching Luffy a powerful technique? I wonder what kind of technique that is? As for the theories on why the World Government is pursuing them, that is another one I like too. To stop the man whom would become Pirate King that would have the knowledge to literally, rule the world or bring it into chaos. Either way, the WG doesn't like it one bit.
I've noticed how it's been eleven months since this was last updated? Wow...it may only be two chapters as I start but this is great! Really, you can't stop here!
| Peter Kim chapter 2 . 10/10/2007
When is Whitebeard is going to be making an apperance in this fic since Whitebeard wants to be the next pirate king and Luffy is one of the real contender for that title and will we see Ace vs Luffy since Ace wants Whitebeard to get the title and Luffy wants that title as well? Which Admirals is sent to stop Luffy from meeting Shanks,is it Aokiji,Kizaru or Akainu and will we see Luffy vs Aokiji?
| Kaydreams chapter 2 . 10/3/2007
Loved it! Please update soon!
| Shijiro chapter 2 . 7/7/2007
ur story is interesting and i like how its way after enies lobby
but im still kind of confused about the "spirit" thing
im guessing ur basing that off of what shanks did when he got on whitebeards ship and his crew started dropping but i dont think that could help him hit a logia user
also im not sure wat technique dragon taught luffy
but i still like ur story and im lookin forward to ur next chapter
| yuMeNami chapter 2 . 5/7/2007
pretty good..keep it up please..
| wheathermangohanssj4 chapter 2 . 5/5/2007
I have to say that this is a great story. Everthing that you said is most likly going to happen in the show, if not the Manga. Thier will have to be a fight with smoker. Thier will have to be a meeting with dragon. Luffy will start trying to find Shanks.
Furthermore i like the fact that you are going with implied Nami/Luffy sense the very beging of the show I've seen the Implied twoway Romance between these two. That is why I love reading those types of stories. All the other popular one make little to no sense.
very little sense
/Robin this is one way love
Nami/Zoro Nothing to indicate a romantice fellings
/Ussopp same reason as Zoro but also Ussopp already has a girl
they make sense but I don't care either way
All Yaoi and Yuri pairings
they just don't make sense and I refuse to belive that any of the charecters are Gay untill Oda says otherwise
sorry to rable
and to finish
Please Plese Plese Update and continue this story
| magicsmith chapter 2 . 2/10/2007
Your understanding and representation of the characters is admirable, especially Luffy. He always appears so simple, but it is easy to believe that there are hidden depths. I look forward to the next update. The quality of your writing is also to be commended.
| Lipana chapter 2 . 2/5/2007
You should add Brook, the "Gentleman Skeleton" and possible long awaited musician!