Reviews for Tithe
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
Not a surprise but a great beginning. please update!
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 2 . 7/1/2016
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 1 . 7/1/2016
Ok when the man said the party was going to be a great celebration he seemed a bit too happy about Iruka leaving. lol just saying you may want to make it a little less enthusiastic. otherwise I love this so far. very interesting and fun. I like the fantasy fics!
Mariel chapter 3 . 4/24/2016
This is really good, I wish there was more, but then I realized the last time it updated was 2009. Best wishes to the author!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/9/2015
This is really good I hope you continue
Korregidora chapter 3 . 1/20/2015
Awww it sounded like it was going to be a good one! I like the fox. :(
Clover letter chapter 3 . 12/25/2014
update fast please
XLightningX chapter 3 . 3/17/2014
Can't wait to read more of your chapters ;)
Miss Tuesday chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
ouhhh I wasn't expecting the demon-fox to be named kyuubi though I probably should have...but it was a fun surprise none-the-less
Hope to read lots more soon!
Viviane Renard chapter 3 . 8/21/2012
I like the start of your story. It's a fun AU, with Iruka being from Wave and having a demon fox familiar. I hope you find the inspiration to finish this story!
danilion chapter 3 . 6/18/2011
I like this story idea of yours very much, and hope that you continue it sometime.

The fox is supposed to be Naruto right? He sounds really cute and funny here, and his interaction with Iruka is very natural. :) All the other animals turning up at the summons was hilarious, I wonder why Iruka even bothered to be surprised anymore. :P Pity they couldn't all follow him, I think that would have been impressive too. :D
Froggy chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
(Me again! _)

The Kyuubi/Naruto familiar has so much potential! Although, of all the characters in Naruto I don't know if I'd choose Naruto for a familiar-demon fox power or not. Haha. _

I totally thought Iruka was going to summon Kakashi-which, really, just means I've been reading too many PWP. *rueful grin*

Lessee here... no specific sentences struck me, but I really appreciate the overall feel to the story. I like the pacing-it seems to be moving rather quickly, but not rushing. And there are so many different ways it could end up; it's very exciting! Plus, we get to see Iruka meet everyone (I'm a huge sucker for character interaction).
Tartha chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
(I'm not logged because my internet hates me.)

I just wanted to squee and jump around and clap because OMG mage!Iruka.

I also wanted to note that I'm a big fan of your work (it is a pleasure to read-you really are a talented writer), and while I icould/i bother you for updates I shan't (having experienced RL myself), and just want to let you know that I really appreciate what you ihave/i written and shared. _ Ty!
bbb136 chapter 3 . 1/30/2011
Oh dear you've caught me - update PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEASE!

ahem. Sorry, my fangirl side isn't always the easiest thing to control. ;) But I stand by what I said though.

I really like this, it's only been three chapters but i've been drawn in.


P.S. My friend just randomly texted me saying that so I felt compelled to add it on. ... DON'T JUDGE ME!

Zuzanny chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
I am really enjoying this fic so far.
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