|Reviews for ANBU BRAT|
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/8
Extremely lackig in Sex Scenes
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/8
Story is good. But you disrespect the readers by not responding. You Owe us. Redo Anbu Brat.
| ExplosiveSex chapter 1 . 2/24
"NOT ABANDONED 23-06-2010"
Last update: 6 years ago.
SURRRREEEE ITS NOT ABANDONED...
| willam and jack and jake chapter 8 . 2/12
nice love it and ino is going to be pissed at her father when they get back
| willam and jack and jake chapter 7 . 2/12
nice he has to explain
| willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 2/12
so the wave arc i wonder what changes
| willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 2/12
ha ha ha
| willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 2/12
| willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 2/12
so he knows
| willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 2/12
| willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 2/11
| JPaagtc chapter 25 . 1/29
Honestly I'm rather confused by this story at this point. It started with a very interesting premise; what if Naruto was raised with the ANBU. You also did a very good job portraying how that would play out. Then when he was kidnapped by Orochimaru it was rather unexpected but I could live with it. After all Orochi-teme did try to give Naruto the curse seal.
When he started revealing his many alterations is when I started to wonder why on Earth it was happening. I understood him having a superior body for Orochimaru but it seemed unnecessary to add in all of the other modifications (aside from the sharingan, that made sense) Then it seemed weird to immediately remove the sharingan as soon as they escape to give them to Tayuya. For her shouldn't they function like Kakashi's sharingan in they they are always on?
Then you came completely out of the blue with him being banished which makes no sense to me. I would think that for him to be banished it would have to overrule the Hokage. Even if all of the civilians and elders voted against him they would still probably need a number of the clan heads to vote against him, which I think s unlikely because of the connections to various clans he has made. It is also annoying that there was no additional explanation of why he was banished.
I certainly don't mean to say this is a bad fanfic. In fact it is one of the best I have read in a while. It just seems that in the recent chapters it has become a roller coaster of inexplicable and, in my opinion, unnecessary plot twists.
| KitsuneLuvr88 chapter 27 . 12/28/2013
Awwwwwwwww there's no more! I want more of this really goid story!
| KitsuneLuvr88 chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
Naruto-chan is so cute!
| Darkness in shadowland chapter 27 . 12/21/2013
This story is too awesome to drop, please continue! I'm hanging on to every last word in anticipation of the next, despite several small errors it flows beautifully. It's my number one fave naruto fic!