Reviews for the Grey Side
kariza2013 chapter 13 . 7/19/2013
please write more!
domsijohn chapter 12 . 6/2/2012
so good
domsijohn chapter 11 . 6/2/2012
this is good i hope they pay ron ginny albus
domsijohn chapter 8 . 6/2/2012
they should pay
Stormshadowfire chapter 13 . 12/25/2011
-pouts- clifyy
domsijohn chapter 7 . 9/16/2011
converted to the Dark. I think Harry should still be friends with Neville, Seamus, Dean, Parvati, and Lavender. I think Ginny should be a jealous bitch when Harry and Draco hook up. I think Draco should be the one to point out that Ron and Hermione are using him. We should pair Sirius w/ someoneā€¦Cheerio,

yes sirius should be alive and on harrys side harry should be friends with everyone mention above

loving it looking forward to more
DopeyDD chapter 13 . 1/24/2011
I think I missed something. Draco had implied that he liked Harry as a boyfriend instead of as a brother but I didn't catch any point where they actually got together until this chapter. I thought they were sleeping in separate beds the first night of school and in the summer. Now they are in a separate room sharing a room and bed with Harry having ignored Draco for weeks. Maybe too big of a jump. I like getting to h/d but this was too drastic a change. I still like some of the story elements just need a little help on timing.

I thought about offering to beta if u still need but am heading into my busy season at work. Might help if you need 2 people to rotate.
domsijohn chapter 13 . 1/24/2011
so want more im guessing that draco and harry are dream of past life where is sirius want more soon pleasee
domsijohn chapter 10 . 1/24/2011
cool the founder are coming back i hope the malfoys destroy the dursely and the weasley and albus poor harry
domsijohn chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
no fucking way albus shoudn't get away this
domsijohn chapter 6 . 1/24/2011
love it i hope nev would go sly but still good
domsijohn chapter 5 . 1/24/2011
nevile luna hermione fred geroge bill charlie sirius all on harrys side
domsijohn chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
love get wait to see what else happens
domsijohn chapter 3 . 1/24/2011
cool love it want more
domsijohn chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
i do hope that harry lets his hair get long and get his money and f over albus in the order of chickens
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