|Reviews for Entwined|
| ew chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
this is junk
Ed and Peter are not gay
| toasty fresh chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
Oh, very nice and cute!
| Aniath chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
wow this story was really good. you have pictured a wonderful paaring and with these little outtakes from their story they become real. sorry if my grammar sucks but i'm living in germany and can't handle english like geman. liebe grüße aniath
| Francienyc chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
Hm. I'm torn. On the one hand, this is an impressive characterization of Edmund, accurate even to all the books and intricate and interesting. It also portrays the relationship of the brothers really well-except for the incest. I find myself wishing this wasn't a slashfic because then it could so easily be one of my favorites. But I'm so very against the incest. I mean, morality and all that, but I just don't get why the two brothers would ever see each other in a sexual way. It seems so out of character for Peter *and* Edmund. Minus those references, though, I think their relationship is perfectly encapsulated.
| marieken chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
I can't even tell you how much I loved this. There are just no words. All I can say is; more more more more more more more more!