|Reviews for A Change Of Alliances|
| Shockwave911 chapter 8 . 2/14/2012
why arre the chapters so short!
| RKF22 chapter 14 . 9/9/2011
Fantastic story great job amazing story
| Lily chapter 12 . 6/2/2011
! You said Clytemnestra! You mentioned her! I am completely and totally amazed and exhilarated!
...Sorry about my freak-out moment. I just love her story. The tragically ill-fated sister of Helen the beautiful-the sister that didn't launch a thousand ships. I'm writing a book about her. Does that explain the enthusiasm!
I know I said I probably wouldn't be reviewing again, but can you blame me? You spoke of her! Achilles spoke her name! *dies and goes to Elysium*
Sorry, that's just like you did a one-two to my jaw. I'm like seriously SOOOOOO happy.
I will stop weirding you out now and bid you adieu.
| Lily chapter 7 . 6/2/2011
Sorry I haven't reviewed before, but I discovered this fanfiction only moments ago. And it was kinda already finished up, or at least I think it is.
Anyway, I felt it necessary to review this chapter, even though I forgot to do so for the earlier ones.
I noticed a few things that I thought were kind of strange. I feel that it's odd that Achilles agreed to help kill all the kings when he and Odysseus are good friends. I mean, aren't they? They were in the movie, at least.
And I-forgive me for my presumptions that I should tell you what to do, or even suggest-kind of thought that Briseis cried too much. I love the couple, I love that you chose to write about them, I love that you kept up with it despite a lack of reviews, and you sincerely are a good writer. You say things that I, an aspiring writer, can never think of or phrase properly and you're much better than a lot of stuff on here. Your grammar, spelling, and vocabulary is much more consistent and well-developed than most, and I look forward to continuing to read this.
| DarkestAngel11 chapter 14 . 1/9/2011
This was a really amazing story! The chapter were Achilles killed Hector nearly gave me a heart attack! This is probably one of my all time favorite Troy stories! Fanominal job! I absolutely loved it from the beginning to the end!
| crazybeachbunny101 chapter 6 . 11/13/2010
THIS IS A GREAT STORY I WISH I FOUND IT EARLIER :) I HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING!
| Liz86000 chapter 14 . 9/5/2010
Very nice fic! I love that couple.
| RedheadObsession chapter 14 . 7/14/2010
| ally chapter 11 . 4/8/2010
thank god i was like no that cant happen
| ally chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
way over twilight it was never really that good but so loving troy love the movie and brad and the man who plays hector is well way finer than Jacob and Edward love this idea of the story amazing wait bid i say amazing lol
| Willow Jane chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
This was...interesting. I liked it. I just thought I was cute how it was so OOC. Aha. Who'd of thought that Achilles could be such a fluff? Aha. This might sound dorky, but I'll say it anyway. I researched this and found out that Achilles truly did love Briseis. It was said that he often mentioned her as his wife. It sounds stupid, but I thought it was cute!
This was a good storyline.
| Loki's Only Love chapter 14 . 10/28/2009
well since you were at the time you wrote this story so desperate for review I figured hey why not lets give her one now and just make her day. I loved this story. It was really well written and I loved how you changed the outcome of the war. Plus you paired my favorite couple together and let them have the life i always felt they deserved. If you wrote another of these i will be sure to leave a review for each chapter i promise. :) Great work!
| Turquoise Girl chapter 14 . 4/28/2008
Aww, she finally said "I love you." And so does he! I can sleep easy now. Thanks for a delightful story.
| Turquoise Girl chapter 13 . 4/28/2008
*sniffs tearily* They married. How romantic!
| Turquoise Girl chapter 12 . 4/28/2008
Hmm...everything worked out fine, but I'm not convinced everything IS fine. You've made me paranoid. Woo-ho! Agamemnon is dead! Such a horrid creature.