|Reviews for I Will If You Will|
| sparklyshimmer2010 chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
*falls off the bed laughing hysterically*
oh dear that was great! i am so very happy to have found it :D
| Myriadragon chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
| flubber chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I loved this story! It reminded me of a conversation that I had with my boyfriend at the top of a very high water slide! (I went down it in the end and have never looked back! )
I liked the fact that it was in dialogue form. This really worked well. The only critisism that I could level at it was that it might have been useful for me as a reader to have a little scene setting paragraph at the beginning. Other than that it thought it was funny and it made me smile.
A prequal letting us know what happned to lead them to this point would make a good story to! Any chance of it happening?
Happy New Year ( I know its a little late but what can I say!)
| angw chapter 1 . 1/13/2007
Hehe. Boys will be boys :)
| memyselfandi89 chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
LOL! Oh yeah the boys are being themselves. So much fun.
| Lady Lemons chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
OMG, really liked the entire thing. Great job with the witty banter back and forth; very very good!
| krysalys chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
*falls over laughing*
Wonderfully written, m'dear!
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
They were dared to do it! Hah! That's funny! I liked the story!
| KateCarter chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
I really liked "Where'd he learn that?" "Us"
The one thing I don't like is script format. If I were you, I'd look it over and see where I could add in actions and descriptions. For example, "Rodney crossed his arms over his chest and looked irritated" or something like that.
Very good attempt, though, made me laugh!
| Reefgirl chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
Hee hee hee
| shywalk chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
very cute :) Enjoyed it thanks
| Sepik chapter 1 . 1/10/2007
But by the way, I'm fairly certain script formatted fics are against the rules of this website. Still, very good snark. Funny to read. :D