Reviews for Lose
rcr chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Sasuke acted like the bastard he is! At least HInata has some one there for her...although, who knows if its a good thing or bad thing.
vash3055 chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
creepy but great continue
nightmare wishes chapter 7 . 6/21/2009
Sasuke is so evil! Poor Hinata! How can he do that to her? Is he that cruel?

Nice chapter! Keep up the great work...
GOD IS MY LIFE chapter 6 . 6/9/2009
i like it

poor hinata

she doesnt deserve

what sasuke is doing to her

nice chapter

update soon

(bad grammar)
nightmare wishes chapter 6 . 6/9/2009
Evil Sasuke!
rcr chapter 6 . 6/8/2009
Sasuke is such a bastard!(And I still love his character(within the story), yet I still want the worst for him...I want to see him suffer all through the story for making HInata suffer.)
rcr chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
Yes, it is all Sasuke's Fault! Hinata has all the right to blame him. He even knows its his fault. Sasuke is the one to blame! Whatever Hinata decides next is her right to choose.
Kirei Yuki Tenshi chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
:'(

I think i'm gunna cry...

DAMN SASUKE!

At least he admitted he was wrong in the end...I guess...

I loved it, so dramatic, such raw emotion. You could feel Hinata's emotions.

Absolutely brilliant!

XELISEX
nejis chapter 4 . 5/14/2009
Oh my god, this is so intense! I can't wait for the next chapter!
25ShadesOfFebruary chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
that was good
Kirei Yuki Tenshi chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
O_O

I must know what will happen!

Loved it!

XELISEX
lunaria-chan chapter 4 . 5/7/2009
this is kinda cool.

some grammar but okay.

o feel sorry for Hinata, wanting a baby and all, it would be awsome if she conceive and she deny Sasuke.

let that bastard suffer, he does not deserves such a sweet girl.
winterkaguya chapter 4 . 5/7/2009
Oh...I wonder what will happen now? Hm...Naruto is an unusual boy huh? Does that mean he has some supernatural powers or some sort? And why won't Sasuke just divorce Hinata if he doesn't love her and its obvious that he just doesn't coz he's not even copulating with his own wife but another woman, ne?

Well, I hope Naruto's plan will turn out as he expected...

Update soon
rcr chapter 4 . 5/7/2009
This is taking a really interesting turn. I can't wait to read more. I will support you all the way. :D
rcr chapter 3 . 5/7/2009
I feel so bad for Hinata. She is such a sweet person and for her to be betrayed by her husband and 'friend' behind her back, is extremely sad. I hope to read more :D.
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