|Reviews for Maximum Ride: A Nightingale's Lament|
| dash chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
first chappie is realy good. i know how u feel about the proof reading. my friend lexis proof reads my books. anyway keep writing ur a natrul writer and a poet.
| alamodie chapter 5 . 11/6/2008
Are you EVER going to update?
| EarthToMe001 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
Aha! I found you! I think? I've been digging through our old emails trying to find the fic you said you'd written after I realized it's been over a year (a year!) since i've heard from you.
And... If you're not who I think you are... eh... sorry :)
| alamodie chapter 6 . 8/19/2008
WTF, this doesn't make sense at all, and since when was Iggy Australian?
It was a great story up tp this chapter, but it was wway confuso.
What happened to using italics for dreams and flashbacks.
And who the heck is Tess?
And how'd he go all of a sudden from 'the guy' to Iggy?
You should add Caleb's POV at the top, because it really wasn't clear at first.
Where the heck does Iggy get a needle from, since when does Max know how to use a gun, when did she get a new power, and why did Izzy run away in the first place?
A lot of questions, which is a clear sign that your story is very confusing [but it was mostly the last chapeterish].
An oh yeah, spell-check!
The story-line WAS good, though, even if it's a bit confusing with all the flashbacks and chocobos[?]
| AmY-DyLaN-SoHiA-aNiKi chapter 6 . 6/24/2007
col! I love your story! Plz plz plz update! -begging on hands and knees- im begging you! make it come FAST! plz!
-amy the blonde TEXAN!
ps. maybe you should cunsider both flocks going to TEXAS! plz!
| Yes. I stole your boyfriend chapter 5 . 6/19/2007
Aww...how sweet! :D
Caleb and Ashe...what a cute couple. I don't really like Max in this story. xD Oh well. I never liked her that much in the first place anyway...
Thank you for updating, by the way. xD
Please do update soon. Thank you.
PS: I'm glad you let Ashe survive. She couldn't die so soon!
| Alyssa chapter 4 . 6/18/2007
Thats really good...I love Caleb!
| Bubble Blower chapter 4 . 6/18/2007
Please write another chapter or 2
| Yes. I stole your boyfriend chapter 3 . 6/11/2007
Update. Please. Oh gods, you better update. xO
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
HI! like ur story! BYE!
| Lost and Never Found chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
*laughs hysterically* Okay, I took sick enjoyment of adding that endnote. I'll be happy to do it again...