|Reviews for Eternity in the Mirror|
| Addicted1 chapter 3 . 11/2
Wow. I was crying so hard by the end of this chapter that I could barely read.
I don't usually read stories written in the present tense, but I thought you used it really effectively here. It hammered home Jack and Irina's emphasis on the Now, and it made your switch to the past tense in this chapter notable and gut-wrenching.
I love your use of details. Jack musing that Eric being afraid to touch Nadia would amuse her as much as it amused him really brought the whole thing home for me.
And the "Only if you want me to."
I have no words to follow that.
Thank you for this. It's beautiful.
| PrincessLeilala chapter 3 . 9/3/2009
İt was sweet, but so sad...I'm crying..
İsabelle İrina Vaughn :D
| Gao chapter 3 . 10/13/2008
Really moving by the end of the story. Nicely done!
| sudoku.addict chapter 3 . 1/18/2008
Wow, nice story. I really enjoyed this, very sweet!
| liz86 chapter 3 . 3/16/2007
Beautiful. You made me cry with this story.
| Elektra101 chapter 3 . 1/12/2007
This was just so beautiful! You made me cry. I just love the story
| amy1oM-InnitMarvelous chapter 3 . 1/11/2007
I'm not much of a J/I shipper these days but this was beautifully written and I am in tears. Brava!