I like how u present young Sesshy

its really dirty but interesting to read

This is so good D:

Aw, poor Sesshomaru, I hope he escapes his father

I love the story!

Cant wait for more!

I am deffinatly loving this fic. It's rare to see Sesshomaru in the state of an uke, as he's always persistant to appear dominant and apathetic.

I also love the way he directs at himself as "This Sesshomaru". It's adorable.

Naraku and Sesshomaru? I'm such a noob to this stuff XD

I really enjoyed reading what you have written so far although to be honest I can't stand Naroku(sp?). This character makes my skin crawl and just having Sesshomaru even thinking of hooking up with him is kind of disturbing but in all fairness I gues we all can't write about Inu/Sess. Please, if this is going to be a Nar/Sess, not Inu/Sess, could you let the reader know in the paragraph above the story. Greatly appreciated and well done!

I don't even like yaoi,AT ALL! But i found this in the angst/rated m sec for Sess. i read it.2nd yaoi i've ever read it,and i gotta say i like ,UPDATE,UPDATE!Please for me?

That's so sad...makes me wanna cry.:(

this story is kinda sad. please updat soon

O.o this story is so twisted it well twisted but overall its an awesome story and i cant wait for the next chappie!

...WOW! - keep it up, I wanna see what happens next :P

NICE! it just keeps getting better -

Nice to see Sesshoumaru growing more and more cunning as this story moves along. I like how he views naraku as his means to escape and I am almost hoping Naraku won't be a complete bastard in this fic. (Poor Sess has suffered enough...ne?) But anywho I can't wait until Inuyaasha puts 2 and 2 together and figures out the depth of what is going on.

Kudos and I can't wait for the next chappie! _

~Onyx

please continue my dear my curiosity is getting the best of me