|Reviews for Secrets Tied in a Big Red Bow|
| jmkmustang chapter 17 . 12/23/2014
Really? "the faithful helmet his worker was supposed to wear." CREATIVE! I LOVE IT AND THE STORIES YOU MAKE!
Ahem. I'm getting ahead of myself. Great job! I wish I was as good as you and that I knew how to create stories on here -_-
| mimiofthemalfoys chapter 25 . 8/24/2014
Well...let me tell you even before I joined this site...i just LOVED your writing! Especially "Leather and Lace" and this one! So i just thought I'll post a review of the entire story...and my thoughts on it... Lemme start with some little stuff that bothered me..plz don't be offended because i'll mention good things too.
1)Portrayal of Mimi in story: Mimi is portrayed as a beautiful-Gorgeous, successful model...independent and headstrong. But...comparing to the Mimi of "L&L"(PLZ PLZ DON'T Be offended) she struck me as rude,whiney and sex-starved. and although she keeps protesting that she's not a whore the first thing she does is to check out Yamato's butt in the airport(!)Her comments on Aiko SHOCKED me. How could she, being a woman, say stuff like that about another girl? How rude, how callously indifferent! She knew she was more beautiful than the skinny creauture before her?! So ? seriously our mimi-i believe would never comment like that on another woman. "Bitch go get herpes"-Yuck!
2)Relationship-Pure sex. their tolerance compassion, needs and feelings the basis of a few weeks of sexual passion-they commit their lives to each other! er...
3)Yamato: this guy#Slap him till it hurts.
4)The ending: erm too perfect isn't it? Although i love TK and Kari :)
Ok now the good things:
1)Side characters: I LOVE TK AND KARI AND SORA AND WANNA CLOMP THEM IN ME ARMS!
2)Costumes: where'd you get the idea of that red dress that mimi wore? I want it now! *drooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooools*...and that black skirt with aqua ribbons! and that zebra-print corset! and Sora's elf dress! IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEE #envy!
3)Inner turmoil of Mimi: It was brilliant. that part where Michael makes Mimi wear the frilly pink dress and twirl like a princess was...Heartwrenching...i like how you used colors we'd normally associate with serenity to describe nightmares-White of blankness, blue of psyched eye, pink of suffocating dresses. Brilliant.
4)The entire story apart from the 4 negative points:Because you rock!
PS: Please don't use 'gay' and 'faggot' so many times while hurts bisexuals' feelings...I'm straight but still...a sweetheart like you (your apology for the 'emo' thing was CUTE)should know this.
PPS: My nickname's Mimi! Mimis rock!
| bloodsucker chapter 20 . 10/14/2013
really i promise im not trying to be mean but the heck end like that oh my gosh and that rule so this mean that your not making another chater man i love happy endings . oh im really sorry im sick and keep getting angry for no reason im just stating the fact how i feel bye and sorry
| bloodsucker chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
i hate michael i really hate that ugly guy
| Guest chapter 22 . 9/8/2013
Awee man,this chapter was pretty funny, but I do wonder why mimi hasn't tried to get in contact with matt or vice versa. A long distance relationship is hard, but not impossible!
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/8/2013
I honestly extremely displeased at Matt's character development. I first of all dint think he lives Mimi at all, just simply lust over her. I think he just lust over anything hot and with cleavage. I mean not only that was he was made to be an idiot as well. If he really hated hurting Mimi then why in god's name did he accepted the date knowing that would hurt her. It was incredibly stupid and selfish. And god damn is Matt selfish. I mean there is seriously a problem when Tai is the voice of reason!
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/8/2013
Wow matt is fucking stupid
| tagny chapter 10 . 9/8/2013
Mimi's a virgin? That's a plot twister.
| tagny chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
I love how you doing develop these characters, they stay very true yo form and yet you do it in a way where you know they have aged and matured. When I think of these characters personalities when they are older, I think about this story and how you have masterfully laid them out. I can't wait to keep reading.
| Alexandra Cruz chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
So good! I love your writing style and the layout of the fan fiction! Definitely one of my favorite stories!
| Nicki Bear 3 chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Its kinda obvious she had a job that had something to do with porn and she changed he channel cause it was showing her
| reinpianist chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
gonna admit this chapter is by far my favorite yet, still not finish with it though
| reinpianist chapter 3 . 6/22/2013
i finally found out what was her last job ＼（ ）／ she was a porn star wasn't she
| asiancheeze chapter 25 . 3/11/2013
Holy shit I love your writing. It just gets so deep and emotional; all those thoughts and feelings that churn out from your characters... oh my かみ...
blaaaargsshsbsshksjs... :D:D:D [goes crazy with eudemonia]
| Mrs Mimi Ishida chapter 25 . 3/24/2012
Amazing! Awesome! Wonderful! I don't have any words to say. I loved it. It's one of the best mimato's stories i ever read.