Reviews for Whirlpool
Selryam chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Loved it! You write well, and it's an interesting idea.
piston heart chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
I... just loved the quiet feel of this fic, and the way the characters seem so solid it's like they're canon. Your Rikku characterization is terrific, too, and the way the angst in this fic isn't too forceful, it's kind of in the background, is just beautiful. I'm faving. Right now would be where I give concrit, but I honestly can't think of any. I'm just sort of numb because this hit me so hard. Thanks for sharing this fic.
Raihu chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Gorgeous prose here, and I can't even begin to express how much I love the maelstrom of vivid personalities you've written up in such a small space. All of these characters - both canon and otherwise - are like forces of nature; they play off of each other, they compete and they coexist. And that is mad characterization.
Valzen chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I really enjoyed this story. It seems fitting that rikku turnns out the same way as auron but acting to change the outcome. i also really like your writting style and how you were able to tie up lose ends without meantioning the people and past.
Riana1 chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
This was brillant and perfect for Rikku.