hmm kinda sad, wanted to see him and rei get together eventually at the end there :(

Even years after my first read-through, I still find myself in love with this fic.

Bravo I say, Bravo.

This was a very interesting story, one of the best SM-fics I've read. No-one was OOC, and everyone had understandable viewpoints. You did particularly well with the Youma - they *are* non-human, so they *shouldn't* have human morals.

I'm very interested in what Emerald's crystal was, what happened during the Great Ice, and all the extra information you didn't include, I'd greatly appreciate it if you could PM me about it.

Either way, 10/10 for the story!

Interesting to see Jupiter's thoughts on Emerald.
Very amused by his inability to let the speech pass him by.

Yeah, Endymion always annoyed me too

Ah, revelation.

I'm loving Emerald's mental asides during his conversations with Rei

The first kiss scene was heartbreaking.
'Rei-chan' was hilarious.

Love how the protagonist dismisses the reasoning given behind the Moon Royalty ruling earth, especially because that was what i always thought too.

My first time reading this, and I'm already liking this, and how Emerald is shaping up as a character.
Glad you decided to re-archive this.

That conversation between Mars and Jupiter within Venus' earshot is one of my personal highlights

Have to say, there's a reason I love this fic. There's always an anti-hero aware of a greater threat that the heroes don't know about. And I've always found those types of characters more enjoyable. Emerald is my kind of guy

Damn you.

This was amazing.

Hey that was a pretty decent writing exercise. I'm confused by the weird sophistry of the protagonist, but it's relieving to see bastions of shining order brought down when you're a depressed pile of filth incapable of feeling positive emotions.
I'm not stupid enough to claim that people deserve total freedom or anything like that in a pragmatic sense, but this sort of context works well in satisfying that sort of scenario.