Reviews for Harry Potter: Grey Wizard 1 The Beginning
Isabella Who chapter 4 . 1/7
I really like this story, Harry doesn't seam overpowered like he is in many fanfictions of this genre, he's just really smart and curious, I hope to see updates in the future
lijoijoij chapter 4 . 8/25/2013
great story, please continue
MargaritaS chapter 4 . 8/22/2013
interesting start, you should continue :)
Madmax1960 chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
I certainly hope your feeling better. Your story is excellent and I hope you do get back into the flow of writing. It would be great to see this story brought to its conclusion.
Traveler301 chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I really wish that you'd post some more chapters. This is a very good story and your writing is excellent.

Thanks, for being a writer,
Ron Pate
Triple Rainbow chapter 4 . 4/2/2013
This is cool so far. There are a lot similar but I like the spin you've put on it.
The Amendable Snow Freak chapter 4 . 2/17/2013
This is great! Postt soon! Thanks!
A Fan chapter 4 . 2/15/2013
Please finish writing this story! I love it, and love the direction you're taking it!
Rodney Russell chapter 4 . 1/28/2013
Great story. The concept that HP gets an introduction to the wizarding world earlier than canon is great! Are you going to continue ths story line?
NeverEndingStoryTeller chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Love this so far - please update soon! :)
hagridhooligan chapter 4 . 9/27/2012
Brilliant story, I really enjoy reading it please update!

Ps: Jump from a bridge :-)
Ibskib chapter 4 . 7/16/2012
It has been an enjoyable read, although with just 4 chapters it's a bit of a tease :-)
I do like the idea of a nonwimpy Harry. One thing that I felt was lacking a bit was the summary of the diaries and the books, it just felt too much like an infodump. That could be improved upon by showing snippets while Harry is reading, and going more indepth and fleshing out Harry's reactions, so that the reader can join Harry in connecting with his mother. As it is now it just feels a bit dry.
Looking forward to any future updates, and more importantly I hope that you are recovering, and feel well enough to connect with your muse.
messhnhs chapter 4 . 4/3/2012
I just finished reading your story and i must that i like it. I see you haven't updated for some time and hope to see that change some time soon.
ShadowCub chapter 4 . 12/13/2011
Hope to see more of this one.

I always thought that canon Harry was too stupid to live.

Never checked to see what he had in the bank and why someone else had his key and also hoped he doesn't hook up with anyone.

After all Hogwarts is a place to get away from asap.
Tomtakahic chapter 4 . 10/11/2011
hi i just read through this story and i find it really interesting i don't think i have read any other fan fictions that started out when harry was this young (unless you count the rebirth ones) or ones where harry was quite so for lack of a better word smart and while you said it wasn't a super powered harry one im not so sure how true that is lol but still i really enjoy it and have put it on story alert so im looking forward to the next chapters :D so till next time
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