Reviews for What If
H.JaneGranger chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
A critique.

When you write a crossover you don't want to crossover three to four different series, epsically when two of the series has aliens, space travel and demons in them. You really shouldn't write Original Characters either when writing a crossover. All of this just makes your story chaotic. And when people write crossovers they have series that correspond with each other and usually are set in the same country. Harry Potter is set in England and Giles went to England in the first season when a friend of his died; before the series started he was a curator of a British museum. Either one would have been better to have the series come together.
Firewolfe chapter 7 . 6/6/2012
I agree. Age restrictions and verification would b e wise as well.

Fire
mkeeg91 chapter 6 . 6/1/2012
why did you stop writing? :(

It was a well written story and I was enjoying it.

Glad to see the Harry/Hermione romance as well ;)

Good Draco and Good Snape are also favorites of mine, so well done :)
LadyElena17 chapter 6 . 6/28/2011
love this chapter. hoping to read more to this story! :) 3
charmedsnape chapter 6 . 5/24/2011
love it cannot wait to see more
Knight25 chapter 6 . 10/25/2009
Please update this story! Continue soon!
gammler chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
sorry but the story has no real plot and it s unrealistic that harry and draco forgive each other that fast... great idea but sadly the caracters are a bit weak
mwinter1 chapter 6 . 7/29/2009
The first time I read this story it was great. Then i stopped looking for it after never seeing any updates. It would be nice to see one more frequently.
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
cool Wiccan
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
man such a way a to find out.
LeeeB chapter 5 . 9/20/2008
absolutely awesome...i love it

and two chapter at once, THANK YOU

:3

more please...
Firewolfe chapter 5 . 9/19/2008
Very well done I hope there is more soon. I can hardly wait to see the headmaster get a piece of torn off by Harry's Aunt's and Godfather.

Lisa
Holen-Snape chapter 5 . 9/19/2008
Love the update. What will happen at summers end? Looking forward to more. thank you
crazedchick chapter 3 . 8/31/2008
A little unusual but I love it.

Please update soon.
IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
Females are just scarier
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