Reviews for Vicious circle
Kibble Beast chapter 17 . 10/24/2009



And WOW! Didn't you start off the entire fic with that scene?

(checks) Yes, you did! Squaring your circle, indeed. :3

...Meheh... I saw a few errors, but they're only small. :\

ME! ME! I'd love to proof read!

(I have enthusiasm for the weirdest things)

Anyway, onwards with my review.

THEY'RE ALIVE! (imagine this repeated about fifty times)

Yay! I knew you'd make it all better!

:P Poor Pulse, is all I can say.

"...and strong arms imprisoning his lean frame in a warm switched off his optics and smiled when metal lips kissed his helmet. Silvergun's spark pulsed gently against his audios, soothing all his pains.

He was home."

I utterly adored those lines. :3

Awwh. Love for Skywarp and Thundercracker.

And Soundwave! He's still around! :D

Oh, it's bad of me, but I can't help but laugh at Astrotrain. I don't even know why.

0_0 No, Starscream! No Sunstorm! Dx

Oh, noes...

And ARG! What a cliffy! You evil person.

:3 Can't wait for more!
Shirox chapter 17 . 10/24/2009
Aww poor Astro, i really feel sorry for him ;_; I hope Sunstorm will make everything better. *PURR* great chapter and really awesome twist with those Vampiricons! :) Can't wait to read more honey :D
tiedwithribbons chapter 17 . 10/24/2009
NO! Just when it seemed like a happy ending, this happens! What are those..."vampiricons" gonna do?

On a lighter note, nice work bringing Sunstorm in, so to speak! Never thought that would happen.

Please update Hunted Species soon!
Magnusrae chapter 17 . 10/24/2009
It was accidental that I didn't read chapter sixteen when it was posted; now I feel bad that I didn't get the full emotional impact of the ending of that chapter, but overjoyed at how things turned out in this one. Wow, lots of surprises and twists and turns. I can't wait to see how it all turns out, especially with the Vapiricons appearing at the end and the time portal still active in the castle. Although the cycle has been broken, it remains to be seen whether or not a happy ending for all involved will occur. I really look forward to finding out.

Btw, I didn't see any mistakes with the language, so good job on that!
sineoneontnee chapter 17 . 10/24/2009
In the movie, Galavatron actually says "Here's a hint" when he transforms before shooting Starscream.
KAZETO chapter 16 . 10/21/2009

Well, as long as Silvergun has a same spark with Galvatron, will he suffer a same fate when Galvatron dies? It sounds like Starscream, Silvergun, galvatron and even Astrotrain's spark have linked together? So... They may all die when Silver gun kills Galvatron?

Amanda Saitou chapter 16 . 10/4/2009
OMG!OO! What an ending! I mean, I know it's still not the end, but yet... The battle between Galvatron and Megatron was quite good, but to watch Megs and Screamer dying all like that, it was heartbreaking. Now I really hope something unexpected (and good) happens!
RianLena chapter 16 . 9/29/2009
Noflamenoflamenoflame... E!... Cannot say how much I love your fic so far. I'm incredibly worried about Screamer and Silvergun/Megs now, but I'm sure something interesting is about to unfold. Amazing job so far dear, and good luck
Francesca Zatnik chapter 16 . 9/28/2009
Oo-hoo-hoo... I'll have to wait and see, huh?
elise chapter 16 . 9/26/2009
this is an insanly wonderful story! ... but it can be confusing, a lot of your sentences are backwards (i can tell you're french! lol) anywho, PLZ UPDATE SOON! )i want to read more! XD
tiedwithribbons chapter 16 . 9/23/2009

I hope you realise that the only reason I'm not angrier than I already am is because you killed Galvatron.

This had better have a happy ending-I don't know how much more heartbreak I can take!
bezz chapter 16 . 9/22/2009
I hate you... because you made me cry my eyes out! ToT that was... so impressive! OMG! no! starscream and silvergun deserves to live happy together forever! wa I cant stop crying! love your story!
zos chapter 16 . 9/21/2009
OMG!!What's going on?!!…
Kibble Beast chapter 16 . 9/21/2009

As usual. What else did I expect? :D

I was so on edge during this chapter.

It was so tense! It could have swung either way!

And, for once, I was cheering for Megsy.

Although, what idiot would cheer for Galvatron? :D

And, WOW! You've put so much effort into this, it's obvious.

All your little tiny hints/ideas... like the way Silvergun turned into Megatron for a brief moment, then back into himself once he conquered... well, himself, in a way. :D

It must have killed Starscream.

Well, I know it DID, but I mean as in, watching and being able to do nothing.

I promised myself I wouldn't cry when I saw the character death warning.

Apparently, promises mean nothing.

Your description at the end was so beautiful! So sweet and emotional, and I couldn't help myself. :3

I'd pick a favourite quote, but I can't! They're all so lovely!

...I loved the line about the 'fire in his optics'.

And the last line was incredible. Words do not describe. :3

You've broken my heart, but I know you'll make it okay in the end.

You've made my day! And you've broken it, too. But, oh well.

Amazing work. :D
FluffyBiscuits chapter 16 . 9/21/2009
Don't worry. I won't flame. But, I'm hoping Megs and Screamer can get a happy ending.
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