Reviews for Angel Suicide
Geminius chapter 2 . 1/6/2010
the first chapter was kinda confusing, but now im starting to get whats going on :)
ArtemisWest chapter 6 . 1/10/2009
Though completely confusing, and not getting majority of the story, I found this quiet enjoyable. You are a brilliant writer, but I suggest trying to organize your thoughts a little more. I loved the idea and I think this story is absolutely amazing! :3
rockyhorrorpicturenope chapter 6 . 8/29/2008
Oi no epiolouge? They are dead,but not dead.. XD
Erendhyl chapter 5 . 3/24/2008
This is not trying to sound mean, but I really did not understand this story. Most of what went on, with all the past lives and stuff, was never fully explained. Like, I didn't really get the bit about the archangels at all. This is really frustrating to me, because this was a really well-written story; I was able to tell that much. You have real talent at writing, this story was just a little difficult to understand. If you ever have the free time, could you maybe go back and edit it, so that it makes a little more sense? I apologize if that sounded mean, but like I said, it was a very good story, and it was frustrating that I couldn't really understand it. Also, next time you write a story, could you put the translation of the Japanese words beside where the word is used, so that readers can know the translation when they read the word, instead of glossing over it as some foreign word and losing some of the story. Wow, this was a long review, and I hope that you don't get offended by it, because this is not a flame and I do not mean for it to sound at all insulting. Think of it as a compliment from someone who really liked your work.
Erendhyl chapter 3 . 3/24/2008
Was their old world the shinobi world, or a different world of angels and demons? That part was a little confusing. But the story is very interesting, even if I don't understand it entirely.
frisked artemis chapter 4 . 9/12/2007
what...my grammar is so...whatever... nywei,

hi there...it's me again. finally done with your fic...nywei, just wanna tell you that i really love this. please just change the way triece told them "bakabakabaka."can she be more self-composed?it would be more effective...i guess...oh,bfore i forget...solomon is so...okay!(wrong word...but i hope you get what i mean)
frisked artemis chapter 6 . 9/12/2007
hi there...it's me again. finally done with your fic...nywei, just wanna tell you that i really love this. please just change the way triece told them "bakabakabaka."can she be more self-composed?it would be more effective...i guess...oh,bfore i forgot...solomon is so...okay!
frisked artemis chapter 5 . 9/11/2007
uhmn...before i proceed, i'd want to tell you that i was only able to go through chapters one to four. the plot is really unique for me...nice imagery as well.i like the way you do it...hmn...a comment...i guess you overdid the phrase "in the process". it sounds effective by the first time you used it but as i proceed through the chapters, i found it overused...( i was a confused by the first parts but all the rest was explained in the latter parts. anywei,i see this as a real good fic...
silvercana chapter 6 . 5/17/2007
I just died, my brain hurts from too much words but it's pretty good though I'm still a little confused

Hey it's good
Callista Miralni chapter 6 . 5/13/2007
Amazing... like I said in my last review, I really like what you've written. The theme of 'Fallen Angel' for a story always makes the work unique. Keep up the good work- am I wrong in thinking that this is a prequel to another one of your stories?
Callista Miralni chapter 1 . 5/13/2007
Wow... your imagery is absolutely amazing. This reminds me of my favorite Naruto fanfic on the site 'Sanctuary of Seven'- but that's not to say you "copied" (forgive my wording- I don't know how else to word it) angel-puppeteer's story. Hmm... keep up the good work... I'm off to read the rest.
Shy Faery chapter 6 . 3/21/2007
I was beginning to wonder where you disappeared off to but I know that sometimes you just have to put stuff on hold and tend to life's responsibilities. Such a bore...hehe ;) The chapter was super long and that's a plus because I love long stories. I'm one of those people who is not satisfied and gets frustrated at an author who takes forever to update and with what? 3 pages! But fortunately, I don't have that little problem with you! At least 30 pages? (hugs) So I understand the long wait.

Wait, Solomon was Sakura's brother? I didn't see that coming. I should have. I think I did. I'm not sure. Anyway, you made Itachi a girl in this one! I was expecting him to show up but I didn't want to have his usual...uh...what's that called? Personality? Uh, no. I just didn't want him to be...You know what I mean and I'm glad for not having that cliche here... I confused myself. Point is that it was a twist. Yeah.

The special edition thingy cleared up alot of things! So thanks for that! It was a 'bit' of comical relief after the chappie but not really. Thank you for the translations! You just helped me add more to my Japanese vocabulary (which isn't big, sadly) so yay!

Apocalypse is next right? Are you going to take a little break or are you going to have that story up right away?

~Shy Faery
awegt4 chapter 6 . 3/20/2007
...isn't solomon sakura's brother? if so, why was he "feasting on sakura's neck"?
Stacey Jacobs chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
No offense, but this fic of yours really sucks. Bad grammar, poor characterization... and the angst is just really trite.

Please do a better job next time. Ja!
franziee chapter 2 . 3/2/2007
thiS iSh xOo adDiCtiVe...

oMg...

aM nOt thAt miXed uP nEmO'...

bUt ii stilL gEt cOnfUsEd cUz...

welL bSta...

hahaha...
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