Reviews for Hidden Occurrences in a Microscope
OpiumPoppy chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Putting the dreams in present tense is really effective, makes it seems more real and frightening. Its also easier to sympathise with HOuse since you get a similar effect to him, its like its happening but we, like house, know its not.

Please please please write more?
ImLostForever chapter 2 . 12/9/2010
well, this is different... i like it!
Pri Maclay chapter 2 . 10/21/2010

No. I refuse to accept that this story isn't going anywhere.

No. That can't be real.

Please write more? Please?
Ali-chan et Vani-chan chapter 2 . 1/4/2009
oh! Angsty! I like it. plz update soon;p
CommodoresSister chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
Are you going to finish this story?
Kazuki Landen chapter 2 . 9/7/2007
The dreams stuff is definately working in present tense... although they're pretty weird...

puhlease write more! You're such a good writer, you need to spread the wealth!
Writerofstrangethings chapter 2 . 8/29/2007

Liveforthemoments chapter 2 . 8/23/2007
Scary... But dreams in present tense do work
HouseAddict16 chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Ok I'm really curious about what's going on with House. Is this fiction over? or just paused? I'm all for reading more so...
lil bishi hunter chapter 2 . 2/20/2007
omg... O.O Wilson slashyay! Tritter slash creepy weird. Hosue having dreams about them... I really dont know what to think of it but I cant seem to get enough of it. Please update soon!
an-angel-in-hell chapter 2 . 1/31/2007
Ooh... this is good, you oughta continue sometime. Me likey.
HousePiglet chapter 2 . 1/29/2007
Wow, I really like this!

For what it's worth, I very much liked the dreams in the present tense, and feel they might have lost some of their impact if you'd put them anywhere else.

I hope you're going to put more up soon :)
InThe27thKingdom chapter 2 . 1/28/2007
This one's interesting. I like the present tense in the dreams. It makes them feel more frantic in some way. Grat job!
RussianWolf7 chapter 2 . 1/21/2007
*puppy dog eyes* More please?


RussianWolf7 chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Dreams in present tense are great.


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