Reviews for What i can give you
freyja0taku chapter 1 . 2/10/2016
aww you changed some things but it's still cute.. hahah :3
Kitty-hiime chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
Oh, it's really cute! Some typos you might want to clear up, and for some reason I kind of think the ending needs to be filled out a bit, but otherwise it's great. Especially Laguna prepping himself in the beginning. Laguna and Raine are such a neglected couple.
Amarant Rose Coral chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
aww how cute:D:D:D just as I imagined it hehe:D very very cute
LilithIllyria chapter 1 . 1/12/2007
It's cute! I love the whole thing. Ty soo much for letting me look it over!