Reviews for If The Cinderella Play Wasn't Altered
Maya Minkus chapter 3 . 2/21
Your story is amazing please update
Guest chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
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the naru foxxx chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
Ch 4 plwez prety plwez

Prety a chary on

Top prety plwez with a chary on top xinfinety waa

I wana read the rest of the

Story don't make me use imaginary pupy dog eyes on

You sory I ges I went a tiny bit over bord but plwez

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The Lugton Dog chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
keep writing awsome WOOP WOOP
XthirteenX chapter 3 . 11/12/2008
omg i love this plese update soon as possible!

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(_) / its kyo
Ghostly Priestess Kikyo chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
I love this pairing, and I've been trying to find all fanfics about it and review them! It's a tough time, let me tell you... Anyways, here's your turn. I really love this story, and can't wait to see more. However, Hana was kind of OOC in that last chapter. I know her family just died, but she doesn't seem the type to cry, at least in public. She doesn't usually seem to show much feeling...
Crouching Tiger Hidden Shizuru chapter 3 . 6/3/2008
I like the pairing but this kinda... sucks. This isn't a flame, there are good parts in it.

I just think you progressed the story too quickly, and there is hardly any detail in it at all. The paragraphs are short and it gets troublesome to have to read it.

I could BETA it for you, if you want me to, as I believe this story could get better.

Overall, a D.

:P

*PST. Let me BETA it!*
SlytherinClassof07 chapter 3 . 2/19/2008
I feel so sorry for Saki. Well the Shoma house is just getting werried by the day.
Kasaki Kihoya chapter 3 . 8/16/2007
POOR SAKI!

hm. I guess this is a really good story! Please continue!
UserID2 chapter 3 . 6/17/2007
freat story i hope you update soon. it's kind of sad how little stories there are with this pairing
unfortunate liar chapter 3 . 6/6/2007
may I just say... you ARE CRUEL! CRUEL, CRUEL, CRUEL! (meaning, 'why didn't you update already?' sorry for what seems like... something different to the meaning)
ToxicLove7 chapter 3 . 6/4/2007
*gives you a bunch of WHOOP WHOOPS* LOL, you said you wanted one!
Minxmessenger chapter 3 . 6/2/2007
hope you update soon
Purple-Rose-Ninja chapter 3 . 5/21/2007
Go Kyo! Don't let anyone make Hana-chan sad! Yes, put up chap 4 soon please! *goes back to playing Shadow the Hedgehog videogame and purposely kills Shadow* Heehee. Torture the hedgehog, torture the hedgehog, torture the hedgehog...
NoShoesNoShirtNoSheldon chapter 3 . 5/2/2007
WOOP WOOP! YAY YOU UPDATED!
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