Reviews for In the Dark
Audrey Kurosaki chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
it's nice, really :)
meantoddy chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
awwwww this is too sweet... i love the last line... :) we all wonder if she could ever love again... and I think she already did :))
Selene Appia chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
Well done :) I don't find Ichigo and Rukia OOC at all (but maybe that's just me).
giby-chan chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Mariagoner chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
So sweet and so comforting! chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
A short, but very nice and well written piece.

Like the portrayal, even so it really is slightly OOC just as you said yourself :P. But still a good little story.
emichii chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
ayaih! its gorgeous! loved it loved it! :)

it was very poetic actually. and you might have thought they were slightly ooc but no, they were certainly believable, especially ichigo's italic thoughts. yeah, i loved reading about ichigo's view on rukia and the way you showed rukia as defiant and proud but still vulnerable! anyway, awesome job! :) *cheers and applauds*
Krissel Himura chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
really really nice! a bit ooc.. yeah. hahaha! um... but you're writing skills are good! I hope you do more of them!
vucizalis chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Aw such sad angsty IchiRuki. makes me wonder if Ichigo knows about Kaein in the canon.
Haruka2007 chapter 1 . 11/5/2007
that is a v sweet and touching one shot :D

i really enjoyed read it :D

gd job *thumbs up*
Alis Volat Propris chapter 1 . 10/9/2007
And the sentence trails off chapter 1 . 9/27/2007
This is cute, and sad. I hope Rukia is able to tell Ichigo of her past love someday. They are meant to be together! N-e way.. keep up the good work!
Larie-chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Nah, for a first Bleach story, I thought you hit the character's pretty well. I especially liked the sentence:

"He doesn’t even know how he decided this in the first place; trying to figure out Rukia is like taking a few minutes out of your day to smash your head against a brick wall just to see if you can break

through, even though you know it is impossible."

Just the way you have it worded seemed to fit into how Ichigo might think.

May the Muses visit you often.
Deus Misereatur chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
So angsty! One-sided IchiRuki? Man...that's so sad...T-T! Keke. Again, write more, k?
Lilah Neal chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
this, truly, is made of awesome.

i didn't see either of them as ooc, personally. i mean, maybe i see something warm and soft and deep developing between the sharp edges of their relationship because they appeal to me as a couple, i don't know; but this is exactly how i imagine them behaving under these circumstances.

it's beautiful as a oneshot, but i must admit that i would love to read rukia's pov.
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