Reviews for Perpetuality |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Whatever happened tochapter 12? It's been 8 yrs! UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am I a fool for still waiting for an update? :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still have hopes that one day you will update! But even if you don't I still really adore this fic and everything about it! :3 |
![]() ![]() Such a cute plot twist. Honestly i didn't expect that. The way you wrote katsuya and matsuo's interactions are written neatly. Your depiction of katsuy and seto's relationship is really cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is amazing and beautifully written! I really enjoy this, and I love how you did the crushing/liking between Seto and Jono, it is really different from the fics I have read. I hope you post a new chapter soon! FAVED AND LIKED FIC AND AUTHOR! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seiichi should kiss Katsuya and Katsuya should realize that even though he doesn't feel that way for Seiichi he is gay. Then again I want to see what you do with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm all for Seto/Jou but dammit! Seiichi/Katsuya is frikin awesome! |
![]() ![]() Ah... Seto... ghetto... Stiletto? Oh man, this is going to botter me... _ Lol. I think this is the second or third time I read this story, it's just that good. X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've considered the fact that you most likely aren't going to finish this, considering how long it's been since you updated. I liked the chapters, and would really like this to continue. But I understand, at the same time. I had a non fanfiction story I was working on, I got up to half way through chapter 13. I don't know why I read it, even though it was obvious it was kind of discontinued, but I did. I enjoyed it, but I feel rather dissatisfied with it's lack of an ending. I walked into it myself, so I don't really have room to complain. About maybe 3% of the stories I read are incomplete, I make sure of that. I'm not a big fan of reading stories that I don't know if they will be continued or not, yet, here I was, willingly reading one that I knew wasn't going to be continued. I can't say it wasn't worth it, but at the same time I know this is going to bother me (which is why I only read complete stories normally). I'll just have to go read something else. . Thank you for writing as much of it as you did anyways. I thought you did very well with it, and I hope one day, you find the motivation to continue it. |
![]() ![]() God! I love this fic! It's hilarious! XD Pretty much laughed my way through it! Love the way you portray the people in it. I especially love Mokuba 3 But he usually rocks when he hows up in stories ...at least the puppy-shipping once. Can't say I've read so many other stories of YuGiOh. :3 Just wanna share some fan-rantings before I go! XD When Jou mentioned the 'light-blue-haired' guy (who later turned out to be Kaiba XD) that was staring at him I went all "...Darts?Ô.õ" Aaaand, since I suck at remembering names (especially "weird" ones) that OC(?) Seimichi or w/e (I like him, I swear XD) with the crush on Katsuya? I kinda don't remember if you given him that through of a description, but all through chapter 10 I was all "what did he look like again? Really good-looking, extremely popular with the women, 100% Gay..." *thinking hard* *picture of Sigfreid pops up* "O.o CURSE YOU, BRAIN!" D: So, yeah... sort-of ruined the whole chapter for me... But despite that little (self-made) miss-hap (that had me rotflmao) I loved this fic! Mmm? What? I already said that? Well I can't say it enough! D p.s I have a little theory, since I believe there was no way Kat could have written the note he slipped in Kaibas pocket in exchange for the picture; Jou's dad knew Kat would be paranoid about him putting a condom on him, he left him that note instead. XD Katsuya just found a excellent way to re-use it! |
![]() ![]() PLEASE finish the next chapter! I really want to know if Seto will ever tell his feelings toward Katsuya... and if they become a family with Mokuba and Shizuka. It would really sweet if at one point in the story if Seto (playing as Matsuo) says "I love you." to Katsuya and he gets the shock of his life and Seto takes off his disguise and he says "And I'm not saying this as 'Matsou', I'm telling you this as Kaiba Seto" It would be AMAZING! Thank you for such a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! Can't wait for it to be updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Within a few days I read all the chapters of this. At first I thought you'd just make Seto advance on Jou in his disguise and have a big dramatic scene when it comes out that he is Matsuo. It was surprising Jou found out about his identity so soon. But it just got even more interesting from then on. I'm really hooked on this story and looking forward to seeing what's going on with the companies. I also like your original characters, especially the hosts! And Jou's dad, haha! I was laughing so much in just this latest chapter. :,D Great! So, I hope you continue soon. I'll cheer you on while you write chapter 12, if it helps! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lolol Jou's dad it too much fun! I love that he cares for his son. :3 Also, man, things are getting interesting! Pieces are falling together. Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww poor Seiichi! I hope Jou doesn't accidentally lead him on. He needs to be with Seto! xD |