Reviews for Overthrown
goob chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
If you're still there, please continue this story. I've been wanting a good Keitaro/Amalla story for a long time.
HarimaHige chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Great first chapter. Im looking forward to read more.
Aelita Lyoko chapter 1 . 6/10/2007
This is a great story I've been waiting for someone to your Amalla/Keitaro story for a long time I would I myself but it would suck and it would have a record of flames if anybody would read it _ haha... yeah so anyway please wright more!
Keikun4283 chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
It seems like its goin to be a good fic. I hope you update soon so Ill be waitin.
Beyond the Bounds-Zenithos chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
Hiya #27,

Just in case you didn't want your name known, judging by your penname. I guess I might as well drop off a review here while I'm around. Well, as I've said at the TFF, there aren't enough Amalla fics out there and seeing one up here feels somewhat...refreshing in a sense. Anyway, keep it up, keep writing, and we're waiting for more.

Good Luck,

Zeni
Drekk chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Well you have gotten my attention there are so very few Keitaro/Amalla fics out there

Looking forward to the update
Godslayer221 chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
It's a good start and I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Big-Babidi chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Interesting. A well written story with a rare pairing, I couldn't ask for more. Keep up the good work and update whenever you can.
soulmaker chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
very good story u got here keep it up.
Vegetto800 chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
um...only three words I can say to this fic..GIVE ME MORE!
Ruto Kuntai chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Alright one-shot. It was well written.

Great work.

R.K.
Akakinzoku chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
...how...i dunno how to explain it, but i look forward to the next chapter
AnimeMaster168 chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
INteresting opening chapter. It portrays a very intruiging storyline. I'm thinkin that a lot of drama's gonna be comin in the next 2 or maybe 3 chapters with Kaolla finding out about the death of her family and then Amalla adjusting to it as well. On another note, a well written chapter. It's got all the important things in it. The main characters are presented, the situation at hand, and it also leaves a lot for people to think about as to who the death of Kaolla's family came about and what's gonna happen after Amalla tells about it. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up.

Hope it's up soon.

AnimeMaster168
someone chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
never heard of this idea before. very original. keep it up
The light of darkness chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Well written piece of work. The romance pairing is often used (if at all), and you made it sound really interesting.

Like tsuruko, Amalla isn't introduced much in the series (even if she does appear more often, but not by much). The way you have written her so far, though, is extremely well done.

Contiue, I look forward to your next chapter.
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