|Reviews for Thin Line: Expect The Unexpected|
| therealchamps chapter 58 . 8/26/2013
Omg. This was such an amazing story. Going to start reading the sequel now.
| lulu chapter 58 . 12/30/2011
such an unexpected ending, loved it from first till last. Amazing !
| Bingobaby chapter 58 . 5/17/2010
I loved this story. I just couldn't stop reading it but to end it this way. You just can't do that. I really hope the sequeal is up but I haven't look yet though. So please will you write this sequeal soon cause I am wondering what is going to happen.
| Melanie chapter 58 . 4/22/2010
Holy crap this is story is bomb! I love it!please keep writing more stories! Ur awesome!
| ThatGirl54 chapter 58 . 2/25/2009
Holy crap! I found this story a few days ago and it has had me addicted ever since! It's amazing! all the different story lines you had going on, the suspense, the surprises and all the drama! All in all... INCREDIBLE! Moving on to the sequel now and i can't freaking wait to see what you think of next! :)
| SKYELAAR chapter 58 . 1/27/2009
OMYGOD BRILLIANT STORY I LUBBED IT AND I CANT WAIT 2 READ THE NEXT 1 AND OMYGOD AT THE END I WANTED 2 CRY I WAS SO SAD THE STORY WAS OVER...WELL 4 NOW XD...AGIAN I SAY VERY GOOD JOB.
| iExplosive chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
good first chapter D
| elusivemuse chapter 58 . 10/15/2008
O i hate it when authors do that. I'm not sure if i enjoyed the story, all i know is that i couldn't stop reading WTF?
| alethea293 chapter 37 . 8/29/2008
Hey... Just been reading for the most time of my first evening off in weeks... and I love it! I'm a sucker for the whole 'suspence, back-and-forth, doubts, insecureties' - thing but girl, you take it to the next level!
Okay... I gotta go to bed now and continue as soon as I can!
| PinkDough chapter 58 . 6/18/2008
Whew...This story kept me entartained and interested the whole way through...When I initially started reading this I thought it was just going to focus on Cory and John but it had multiple different storylines in it...Where do u keep all those ideas at? lol!...I felt like I was reading a soap opera bcuz the story had so much going on and I loved it...Your writing is great...I like how you are able to convey all the different emotions each character is feeling...The whole birth certificate thing-damn sure wasn't expecting that...beautiful way to end the story...I did get frustrated at times bcuz I wanted John and Cory to get together and then u go throwin in something that breaks them up :-( lol!...I could just kick Adam's ass for kissing Viv when she was obviously vulnerable..though I wonder what would have happened if Jeff hadn't showed up...Looking forward to what will happen with Matt and Lianna...Overall it was a really great story and I am really liking the sequel so far!
| ChainGangCutie chapter 58 . 3/10/2008
omg omg omg! that ending was definately a shock! omg savannah is such a freak! and as for jacinda she needs to get her ass kicked...mark needs to find dawn and soon...i hope taylor is alright...i can't wait to get the sequel started and im on my way to read it right now :)
| ChainGangCutie chapter 57 . 3/10/2008
omg i can't believe cory told mark about dawn being pregnant! and now he's mad at her for keeping it from him! this sucks! john and cory talked but i do not like the way things ended with them...omg i can't believe viveca kissed adam...and omg poor jeff he had to witness the whole thing...well im off to read the last chapter
| ChainGangCutie chapter 56 . 3/10/2008
no why is taylor lying to chris? she needs to tell him she's leaving...omg jeff and viveca aw...that was just the sweetest thing ever...and im soo glad she said yes...when is john going to talk to cory?
| ChainGangCutie chapter 55 . 3/10/2008
when the hell is jeff going to propose? and what's going on with dawn?
| ChainGangCutie chapter 54 . 3/10/2008
im so glad jason found the ring...and i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next