Reviews for A Part of Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() If its a trait that runs in families it seems obvious that it would likely be a Black. Im surprised Sirius didnt say so and go look at the family tapestry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ive never understood why people get so upset irl and in books when someone stands up for himself or herself and makes the bullies think twoce before coming at them again. Id be proud of my kid, and id be filing charges against the attackers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, Harry isnt wrong. You should always go into a fight ready to do the worst even if you dont want to. If you dont finish the enemy, the next person he goes after in retribution wont be you- it will be someone you care about that cant defend themselves. If your enemy cant beat you head on he will try to demoralize you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really love the Dark Prince stories. I can think of no other sentence to praise the great author, but I am glad to have read it. The psychological changes in this article are very interesting. Please ignore my grammar mistakes, my native language is not English. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is my first time seeing the writer describe Harry's emotions so vividly. The transition from the dark side to the bright side feels so natural. His feelings really show the depth of his past suffering, what he did to Voldemort and Bella, and how those feelings affected both him and his family. It all feels so real. |
![]() ![]() i got into the story cause of the rewrite (which is actualy good) this however is hot garbage- i only stuck with it this long cause the rewrite is unfinished and i wanted content too desperatly and tricked myself into believing this is the same story |
![]() ![]() harry is trolling so hard lmao he could litteraly just take over britan instead he plays punching bag 10/10 acting on that kid |
![]() ![]() i genuinly think its revulsing that harry forgave something like that. absolutly disgusting. there are mistakes in life u cant even make once. |
![]() ![]() im so sad knowing that harry will eventualy come around betrayal like this should never be forgiven also im surpised that ron and herminy showed up in that spell he cast on himself- not because they betrayed him but because they legit are only minions that harry should have no real atachment to unlike in canon. which is, i guess, their redeeming quality: beeing harrys best friends in canon |
![]() ![]() "are you breaking up with me?" lmao she broke up with HIM the moment she decided to betray him |
![]() ![]() omg i love helen FINALY SOMEBODY WHO SAYS ALL THE OBVIOUS STUFF |
![]() ![]() i cant believe how much i hate james and lily in the original version- and how much i love them in the rewrite makes the original extremly unenjoyable |
![]() ![]() I love this chappie and pls keep calling it chappie bc it feels more like you’re talking to a friend |
![]() ![]() ![]() If at a quarter way through a story the author has to still leave Author's Notes telling the readers not to worry, that there IS a plot to this story if they just hang in there, I no longer believe them. |