| Reviews for A Part of Me |
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  yuli chapter 44 . 12/24/2019 nice |
 Wicked Witch from Teal Falls chapter 38 . 11/15/2019 IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 40 . 8/27/2019 NO! |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 38 . 8/27/2019 YES! |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 35 . 8/27/2019 GINNY! |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 32 . 8/27/2019 ugh... BUT WHY |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 29 . 8/27/2019 NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO! ! ! ! ! ! NO |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 21 . 8/27/2019 The horcrux in his head is taking over ! I mean that's what I think... |
| royalpurpleclouds chapter 10 . 8/27/2019 lol that was hilarious |
| Pud N. Tane chapter 31 . 8/7/2019 I have spent the last year or so reading at this site and came upon your stories. I realize that I am late in responding, but I have just read these two stories up to this point. All in all the story line is a wonderful idea. Your planning and care put into the story line shows in the well written nothing out of thin air manner. My problem with this story is that in my humble opinion that (1) Harry is not a likeable person, he for the most part appears mean, vindictive, uncaring and manipulative towards the others. I don't see how he would have the following of his friends to such a degree. (2) Going on the assumption that Harry, James and Lilly are above average intelligence (teachers at a premier school and an above average student) they tend to repeat the same mistakes over and over again. (3) Harry does exactly the same things that he holds against the others and does not notice the irony of it. Overall I'm impressed with your work. Keep it up. |
| hzlanderson chapter 1 . 7/28/2019 This story needs serious editing! There are mistakes everywhere! The plot is very good though, I won't deny that! |
| hzlanderson chapter 33 . 7/28/2019 "I know you are guilty for Mr Nott's death and I'm going to let you get away with it?" Hm... I think there's a word missing somewhere in there! |
| Cannibal Corncob chapter 44 . 7/25/2019 Super cool. I enjoyed this story a lot. Great job. |
| Estelle chapter 11 . 7/15/2019 I am a foreigner, and this charming novel fascinates me even though I have to read it with a translator. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/14/2019 I LOVE Harry being sooo powerful and dark |