Reviews for Extenuating Circumstances
dandiwishes chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Wow, I like the way you wrote this! Interesting
Pyrane chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
I wonder what was the price for them... Not being awarded, perhaps ?
Thanks for the story ;D

mabidiso chapter 4 . 3/16/2012
Clever and so very funny. Loved the epilogue where Doumeki has both sides of the conversation.
K1M chapter 4 . 9/3/2010
Aw, that was such a nice story! I really enjoyed it, it was fun to read. I liked the little twist at the end, when Yuuko reveals that the little spirit was not evil and would have probably gladly entered in the lantern if Watanuki and Doumeki hadn't tried to trap him. But I'm glad they didn't realize it soon enough, because if they had we wouldn't have had such a great story to read! XD

Thanks for sharing your work!
CaDor chapter 4 . 10/17/2009
Wow. That was cute. The dialogue told most of the story. Had a lot of fun.
oLynxXo chapter 4 . 9/28/2009
Oh my god, you didn't lie when you said fluff

Cute fic, I loved it.
Spiegel chapter 4 . 1/25/2009
Fabulous take on the "aliens made them do it" plot. There is so much to like here: that the spirit only made them *start* it; that there is an actual plot involving the capture of the spirit and its backstory; all the hilarious turn of phrases that fit really well with Watanuki's inner flailing.
Ishanatur chapter 4 . 1/5/2009
ive never read a xholic fic before ... honestly i rarely stray out of the narutoverse ... but im so glad i did! This is wonderful! lots of great writing as well. and i am so glad you wrote the before AND after!
Keiko-kohai chapter 4 . 12/20/2008
Aww, kawaii! Man, Clamp needs to add something like this to get his thoughts moving in the right direction. Maybe if Doumeki could be a little more forward. . .

Anyway, awesome story!
Celare chapter 4 . 10/21/2008
Again: d'aww.

So cute.
Celare chapter 3 . 10/21/2008
*squeals like the insane fangirl she is*

"We could always do it again. The traditional way, I mean."

... "Okay."

Kyaa~! I am loving this story, not only because it's well-written and your choice of pairing is one of my favs, but also because you're keeping them SO in-character.
Celare chapter 2 . 10/21/2008
LOLZ. Doumeki, you little seducer you.

I think it's great that the lemon was almost more funny than hot.
Celare chapter 1 . 10/21/2008
PAHAHAHA. You've got a hilarious concept here. And I absolutely love how in-character you've made Watanuki:

"Watanuki planned madly for a couple of seconds."

Pelin chapter 4 . 1/23/2008
That was absolutely amazing, one of the best xHOLiC fics I've read :)
prettypriestess chapter 4 . 1/17/2008
I would just like to say that I love your work. Even if I am too lazy to review the majority of it (and, for the record, in case I never go back to the Discworld stuff, it was made of total WIN).

A lot of fic-writers try to do sequels like this (though not all end up with four pieces instead of one) and it has a tendency to leave the reader wishing they were back at the wanting of a sequel because the real sequel qas such a disappointment.

This was not like that. The second chapter was lovely, and that little bit of mooshy watanuki-loves-doumeki-and-thank-the-gods-for-porn-parodies was amusing as well as really kinda sweet underneath the shouting and little bit of seriousness.

And then you went back and wrote the actual capture of the spirit, and then Yuuko released it and took payment from it AND the man, and it's TOTALLY how it would really go in the series, which just went to show that you're even MORE amazing, because most fic-writers would butcher that, too.

AND THEN you managed to pull off a totally mushy second epilogue, which, by the way, was totally amazing, too. Right when it got so mushy it started to look the slightest bit OOC, and then Doumeki goes and suggests they go to sleep and effectively kills the whole thing, and it makes it a funny-holicesque end, not quite a stupid 'Let's end on a joke!' and above the mooshy 'WO have some totallynotpornyOOCfluff!',

Okay, that was totally a ramble, but it still doesn't do justice to how lovely your writing is! I cannot begin to express how amazed I am that anyone can pull off a 'Hey! I should totally write it needs a sequel...and an epilogue...and what the hell, why not a SECOND epilogue!' fic.

You are made of total awesome. :D
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