Reviews for Hell's Radiance
Tifah 98 chapter 32 . 5/27/2014
Iiii sooooo LOVE sakura and human kyuubi!
I love that their relationship is sexual and soo fucking UNHEALTHY! One minute I'm like they love each other the next I'm thinking they wanna kill each other and I love it! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Tifah 98 chapter 30 . 5/27/2014
I ssssoooo love your work with this story! Im sorta kinda rooting for sakura and human kyubbi still a die hard NaruSaku fan! Preferred it when she was still asleep but I'm soo loving this story keep it up you're an EPIC WRITER!
Winnie chapter 31 . 5/17/2014
Amazing story, I've never actually read a Sakura/Naruto fic...usually staying away from them actually. But the plot twists and really just the whole perspective of how Sakura uses the Kyuubi. Funny how different she turned out than Naruto.

And lovely lovely bloodshed.

Kind of shame Kakashi was a douche...but it was nice how he died.
You can interpret what I mean by 'nice'.
fbfbg chapter 40 . 4/19/2014
A magnificent story if i ever saw one.
Tifah 98 chapter 5 . 4/13/2014
I keep getting chills!
Tifah 98 chapter 4 . 4/13/2014
can't get enough!
Tifah 98 chapter 2 . 4/13/2014
Sooooooooo LOVED IT!
Tifah 98 chapter 1 . 4/13/2014
so love it will read more hope the clean versions contain sex!
elorielee chapter 40 . 4/6/2014
Magnificent story, thank you!
GoldenGuard227 chapter 16 . 3/29/2014
Well I have read up to this point so far, and I must say that this story is masterfully written. I absolutely love the way you portrayed Sakura in this story, where I believe that this is the most amazing and badazz version of her that I have ever read, or seen. I love her attitude, how dark and ruthless she is, her attractiveness, and how powerful she becomes.
I also adore the dark and eerie mood of the story, very well done. You are capable of keeping your story consistent throughout everything, great grammar and spelling (very few mistakes so well done again), and I love how you portray all the other characters as well. The conversations between characters are human and believable, I also love how you portrayed Naruto and Sakura's relationship, it was well paced and didn't feel rushed, and they're adorable together, in a loving bloodthirsty kind of way lol.
So overall, great story, and I can't wait to finish it. Great writing, and thank you.
Toreh chapter 40 . 3/29/2014
Wow, I can't believe I haven't read this before. This was an absolutely amazing read! I'm not one for dark fics, but this dark universe you created was just so mesmerizing. Your characterization was so good that you had me justifying the characters' immoral actions and hoping 'evil' would prevail. I'm also very satisfied with the ending.

Just as an added thought, I found myself growing used to the idea of a black haired Sakura throughout this fic. I think it would have been a nice bout of symbolism if after Sakura got her hair charred off during Echo, perhaps some remnants of pink begin to grow back? It's probably cheesy of me to think, but I could have seen that happening.

I could go on and on about everything I liked, but it's 4 in the morning.
I spent two days straight reading this and I'm just so floored at how much thought and effort must have gone into writing it. I just realized you wrote this years ago and can't imagine how much your writing has probably continued to grow. You are a fantastic writer. I will definitely keep an eye out for your other works. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us and finishing this.
EmiliaKyuchi chapter 10 . 11/10/2013
This story is so amazing! Very dark, but amazing none the less. I can't wait to read more!
Lairenna chapter 40 . 11/2/2013
Good god it took me 3 days to read this, maybe 4-5 hours a day. That is IMPRESSIVE writing. I love you so much you have no idea.

Guest chapter 40 . 10/29/2013
What the hell was this shit? It went from slaughtering shit to "Everybody is cool with Sakura" in like 2 lines. Ugh.
Anonymous chapter 14 . 9/20/2013
Okay, normally, I'll just do one review. Your writing, however, it speaks to me. It's fun, light, digestible, with subtleties and implications and fun happy places and it's a joy to read. The notes of what has changed always end up highlight the most enjoyable parts, and nothing seems superfluous.

But you need someone to say this. Barley is a grain. It's used to make beer, and some types of bread, and sometimes eaten in soups. Barely is the word you are looking for, every SINGLE time. If you could switch every instance of barley for barely, it would be such an improvement.

Aside from that, the only things wrong with this story are occasional typos (I think I've seen 2).
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