Reviews for Memories of a Graveyard
Frust-sheep chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
Really, really great story! I loved it! *favs*
Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
*sniffle sniffle 2 thumbs up*
scribblemyname chapter 2 . 6/23/2009
I read this one ages ago when I couldn't review (work, long story) and I loved it so much then. It still twists my heart and warms it. You wrote it so well and it just always makes me feel. So well done.
xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Nice little sad story! Keep up the great work! _
My Deliah chapter 1 . 2/28/2007
aw, that was a sad one, but I love tragedy, so I loved it! I also liked the way you wrote this one. The text felt personal somehow, and there was such depth in this story. An example of great writing, and I could only wish that my grammar were as good as yours.

Ps. I'd be glad if you would check out my ‘I am Death’ story also, and maybe tell me what you think.
FireFox ShadowWolf chapter 1 . 2/5/2007
this is awesome
Shadowdancer9 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
i'm curious but there wasn't enough in the first chapter to form a real opinuon or give you real feedback. But I am curious about your story. I'll add the story to my alert list to see what is up with the story. If I like it then I will add you to the alert list!
impeccableblahs chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
beautifully written.

the ending was perfect.

i just wish kyro fics were longer. people are so in love with oneshots when it comes to that couple.

anyway. loved it.
Enrika721 chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Hmm, it was pretty good. There were a few run on sentances and the paragraph where Kitty was gushing her heart out to Logan needed a bit of work, but otherwise you were good.

Kate (Fantasygirl721)
AliceInSomewhereland chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I really liked this. I liked the plot and I liked the converstaion between Logan and Kitty. Some constructive criticism: keep an eye on your dialogue sentences. Watch punctuation. What I got from it was that there wasn't a body that they buried for John. I'm fairly sure that that's what you were implying based on the conversation and the ending (and I apologize if I am in fact wrong), but I think that you should have made that clearer. On another note though, I definitely think that if you are feeling ambitious, you should write a sequel. From the way you wrote the ending (which I loved, btw - it was my favorite part, and not because the story was over. i *LOVED* how you wrote it) it seemed like you had not intended to make anything else, and I'm ok with that personally, and I think that it's a great ending, but if you're ever extremely, extremely bored and are wondering what to do with your time, WRITE A SEQUEL! :-D lol. Keep writing Kyros, and wonderful job!