Reviews for Spiral
StrugglingForWords chapter 9 . 11/11/2009
i really like this story :)

and i love this chapter

i cant wait to read mroe so please please update soon :)
Isuzu Hime chapter 9 . 11/11/2009
Ok now,

First I love your story, BUT I don't understand everything... Why Sadako isn't trying to return to the present? Why did her father sent her in the past if it's not to change the futur? Apparently the Sadako who went back in the past grew up and finally there is 2 Sadako's in the present time. So, why, knowing what would happen, Sadako didn't warned Sakura that her daughter was going to be missing? Sorry, It's a bit confused, but I don't understand...
Perfect love kills all fear chapter 9 . 11/11/2009
loved the chapter's.

I'm confused. In a earlier chapter. Sadako stayed in the past. She was still there when the 12(or 13) year old Sadako went in the past. What's going on there?

It seems like it's too late to conceive Sadako now. Oro is comming...

Sadako should still train with her sharingon. She may not be able to around people but just in case. Is her identity going to be hidden forever?

I love your story, please update soon.

CagedHeart chapter 9 . 11/10/2009
OMG! I'm on the edge of my seat! And the month skips,they're amazing! i love how you do them and still get the point acrossed. and Sadako all grown up, in the last chapter, i think, OMG SURPRISE! i was like, holy crap! didn't expect that one coming! But this story is just getting better and better! UPDATE!
The Winggoddess chapter 9 . 11/10/2009
so glad you updated. I pretty much forgot about this story and I had to re-read some of it, lol. I like that you made a comeback with two very long chapters. That made me happy :) I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope you can update soon!
xXxtellmewhyxXx chapter 9 . 11/10/2009
omg! i love this story...and it was like my first time reading and i had to finish it in one day.. i hope you update real soon ]
Isuzu Hime chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Just read 1st chapter and it's very good so far and original.

I hope Sadako will managed to change history!
oh.bonita chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
it was all good till chap 7. from there on out, the story line is very confusing, your original writing style doesn't match up with what you wrote now and the "natural" feel to the story comedy is gone. i really don't think these chapters lived up to your high standard im used to. good effort though and thanks for updating!
DarkFlame Alchemist chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
finally there's an update I love this story... update soon plz
Jiade-103 chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
This is a review for both chapters.

I don't really know what to say besides these chapters are way overdue and that I'm confused. I love the lines separating from the different months but I think you should start putting "Recap:" at the beginning of your chapters if you're going to take a while to write the chapters up. And maybe a new summary every once and a while. It's hard to remember what you were writing about and what happened three chapters before hand. Especially since you switched to the present from the past so quickly. Kind of confused me a little for a few minutes. Warnings would be helpful too. Even in professional novels when they switch the the past or the present or the future they have a heading that explains that to you. "PAST." "PRESENT."

Anyways. I liked it, you put some great moments in there. Can I mention something very very important. Sadako is in the past right? ... and if you change the past you effect the future right? ... so if Sadako is currently and constantly changing the past with her very own presence the future has to change... it's the laws of physics.

sillimiss chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
absolutely amazing. can't wait for the next chapter.
BlueSword23 chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
update son!
Lady Rini chapter 8 . 11/9/2009
I really like this story it's very funny and cute to see how Sasuke and Sadako act so much alike.
Little Minamino chapter 9 . 11/9/2009
Hurray for SasuSaku/NaruHina! - It's been a while but you made up for it with a really long update so all is forgiven. I loved the Sasu/Sado family moments. Very cute. Keep up the great work!
StrugglingForWords chapter 7 . 8/31/2009
I really really like this story D

i cant wait to read more

so please please please update soon D
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