|Reviews for Treason|
| MBDTA chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Poor Eothain! The development and everything else is great! Just one thing, though: there was a little box and a "g" at the beginning of most of the dialogue. I thought you might want to know. Anyway, I hope for a speedy update!
The Editor of MBDTA
| JuliaAurelia chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
An exciting first chapter! Poor Elfwine, I wonder who has taken him and for what reason? I was very glad to see Eomer showing up in the middle to comfort Lothi and take charge of finding his son. I don't believe that Eothain had anything to do with the kidnapping plot, and agree with Eomer that he should be released and allowed to join the search party. He has always been totally loyal in the past, I just can't see him ever turning traitor. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Ivanolix chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Poor Elfwine! Hmm, a mystery. I was sort of expecting fluff, but this is good too. :-)
| Lady Anck-su-namun chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
Oh my - what intrigue! I am enjoying this so far!