Reviews for Love At First Sight
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 7/22/2007
I love it!
ta1nt3d1uv chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
This is very well written. I like it.
Zoey24 chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
I think this is awesome!
purplebunnywabbit chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
I think you did a very good job, I love the detail. The reiteration of “how do you see me?” gives a little more drama, a little more… oomph :D. Loved it, as usual, a great piece.
mischief-and-serenity chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
WOW! You've rendered me speechless. It's great, I love how Max sees herself in Alec's eyes. It was beautiful. You should try to come up with some more!
christique chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Wow, that was so simple and beautiful! I really liked this a lot. This has to be the neatest way I've ever read Max realizing her love for Alec, by seeing the way he makes her react. His eyes acted like a mirror to her soul, both figuratively and literally. Awesome job with this!
p3karen chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
It was beautiful, GREAT JOB
Stand In Girl chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Wonderful. Somewhere between a story and a poem. I really loved how vague it was, but how it completely told the story at the same time. It was centered around emotions rather than actions, which is unusual. Really great piece.
Mahine chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
That was so beautiful, I was totally captured in your words.

jorie chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
that was beautiful... it was like poetry and prose combined... good job!