|Reviews for The Reason for Ramen|
| lokobookworm95 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
That... is a very disturbing idea. I like it!
| drarryderps chapter 1 . 2/26/2007
kewl...though I don't get it...kewl D
| Tama Saga chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
I know I'm overthinking...but what would be the possible time frame for this story? It sounds like a combination of early genin years and the current year. Early genin because it has that younger feel to it. Yet current year because Sakura wouldn't have asked the time from Naruto, much less accompanied him to a ramen stand.
"His eyes seemed more troubled now than ever." This line is problematic. It's the "than ever" part that bothers me. It sounds like he's been troubled for a long time. But he was just starting to appear worried...so the word choice doesn't fit. You can't just strike off those two words however, aside from being vague...it still wouldn't fit.
It's an interesting idea, I think it was definitely an entertaining read. Great food for thought too...it's the sort of idea that I'd like to include in my stories because it breaks the norm.
| aegisZero chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
you should expand this and try to make a short story out of it, your punch line didn't seem really amusing, but it could be done
| The Drowsy Dormouse chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
XD That made me happy inside XD