|Reviews for Reiworld|
| Dartz-IRL chapter 1 . 6/3/2007
I remember reading this and liking it when you first posted. The idea definitely made me smile... and it's something original for an SI...
Most of your issues are style related, a few run on sentences her and there and the such, but it's a minor glitch. It's a style thing, which should improve the more you write..
I would ask that you make use of scene dividers where necessary, instead of just 'meanwhile...'. It doesn't stand out enough, and the sudden jump can be a bit of a shock.
What I'd really ask you to do though, is update this. It's a clever idea deserving of life... Just be careful with your charecterisations, read it through a few times before posting, and get going.
| Fifth Horseman chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
The amount of havoc (or good) that Rei could cause is limitless. Could be funny as hell to.
| Midnight Lost chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
LMAO thats funny, cant wait for more
| Krimzonrayne chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
gah! What an amazingly brilliant idea!
I can wait to see more, although... Rei, wouldn't she give it to commander Ikari to help his world domination schemes? Becareful with that line of thought...
until next time then
| Cryoxe chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Ah nice little story, Drunken Chocobos are what make the world go round
| Ai Zhao Dao chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
Ai yai yai! What have you done! You know that the evilest ones never talk. *sigh* Well, guess I'll just sit back and watch the world crumble around me...
| Dark-Plague2863 chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
MUAHAHAHA! THE COSMIC AUTHOR'S NOT SO COSMIC NOW, IS HE? :
This looks like it'll be a fun ride, I'll be keeping an eye. xP
| dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
| NefCanuck chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Oh I suppose this *could* be worse... If the Psycho Fraulein ever got *her* hands on that notebook.
Of course if I'm Shinji, I'm afraid... *very* afraid right now :P
| WorkingClassNinja chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
The next thing Rei wrote into existence was a highly... subserviant Shinji.
*wink wink nudge nudge*
| ttoad chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
wow...this could get interesting...and why is your chocobo drunk, don't you know how tiny their livers are?
| Hamstadini chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
...You get the idea. X-] Hope to see more...
| Alucard180 chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
a very interesting idea, put make coming chapters longer and more detailed and this can really be something
| Lord Cynic chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Oh great, now Asuka will be a super brat... meh. Great start so far. I'm expecting awesome things from this story. Like Gendo doing ballet or something...
| ZeroSinRaid chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
dude sweet. thats all i can say sweet