Reviews for Betrayed
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
ouch depressing much...mind how did he mange to kill himself with the Kyuubi's healing in full whack...? ...just saying. :p
Azhwi chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
I feel bad, I read it, I loved it. And then for some reason I didn't review - nor did I add it to favourites. For months. I do believe there is something wrong with me.

I think I may have been rather intimidated by the story.

It's sad, and intense. There's such emotion that it's a struggle to put reactions into words. The very thought that Naruto gave up is so deeply wrong, that it instantly makes me tear up inside.

By far I do enjoy the story. It's beautiful in its writing and pacing. Sasuke is portrayed as he should be. Emotional only when he is pushed. Though I think a good part of his seemingly docility during the moments before his breakdown at the wake was probably due to shock.

I was actually reading another story when it triggered a memory of this one.


As always, I love your writing style. Thank you so much for the story.
I'LL-BE-THERE-4-U chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
so sad,thats how sasuke would probly react
reychop chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
Oh my god! I laughed! I never laughed while reading an angst, one-shot story.. Hahaha, this is so funny, just thinking about Sasuke kicking those poor vases! Everyone might think he had gone insane... lol

Anyway, Brilliant idea, I never read a story about someone stating that Naruto betrayed them when he commit suicide, well, I say this one is somewhat unique.

Though I still haven't realized Naruto's question, it would be appreciated if someone can enlighten me. Anyway, it doesn't affect my views on the story, this one is still great!
Nymyrra chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
Very emotional.
redbull07 chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
oh wow. I loved this. really loved it.
tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
wow, how sad...
Neo-Ninja chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
A word from Itachi to Sasuke, who actualy has spys watching his little brother.

Foolish little brother, you think that you can solve all of your problems with revenge, but what will you do, I wonder, when there is no one to avenge. Will you blame those around you, yes, will you seek vengance on this dobe, yes, will you lay awake every night taking vengence on yourself, yes, will you ever have your revenge?


No, I don't think you will.

A word from a dead Naruto as he watches his funeral from the Hokage monument, his soul tethered to the earth by regrets and unfufiled promises.

Well this just sucks...

A word from Orochimaru himself.

Kukukuku, poor Sasuke, you stay in Konoha for an idiot who can't handle the weight of the world and a village that I will grind into dust. I wonder, is your pain enough to make you come to me? What if I could give you the offer Tsunade declined, what if I brought that peice of filth back to life? Kukukuku, the possibilities of this new, albet unexpected, development are most interesting.

Each character probably has a take on this, even Zabuza, who, in the even of Haku's death, could not leave the world without regrets, and so was inevatably chained to the great Naruto Bridge.

Life begins, life ends, we are all simply wheels in the never ending spin of time.

-Woah Zabuza, that was deep...

Yeah well, when your dead you tend to ponder these things.
moonsauce chapter 1 . 3/11/2007
dear god...

i got all teary eyed...

WAY COOL fic. .
Silver-Guardian of Ancients chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
so sad :'(
Fruity-Chan chapter 1 . 2/11/2007
Wow, I love your writing technique. This SS was amazing, I love it!
IntertwinedxDestinies chapter 1 . 2/7/2007
great fic...well written, great plot, the characters we're OOC...loved it...this is definitely one of my favorites...
Shadow Kitsune67 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
hmm. I'm guessing. Naru commited suicide? o.o and the logic was poor on Sasuke's part cause..Naru was already dead. and carnations are usually seen at a funeral. Nice fic. 3
Gothic Tigress chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
that was sad :'
heya chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Sasuke deserved it.

Heheh. _
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