|Reviews for Cold|
| Twitch Hopeless Savage chapter 1 . 4/22/2007
omfg. i love it. paranoia and germaphobia.
they are so neurotic.
| Saralisse chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I like it.
There were a couple typos, though.
"antibacterial wash in her and rubbed it over her hands."
where was the antibacterial wash?
lol. It was pretty good.
| Harmonic Friction chapter 1 . 1/15/2007
Uhm, well, of course it's totally perfect and hot- totally not what I expected, totally wonderous, oh my gosh. "I hate you more!" & Syndrome freaking out in the dark, and Mirage being OCD, which works beautifully.
I might have to request a gift again.