Reviews for White Fox
Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
That was... interesting. It didn't feel right the way the romance between Artemis and Will developed - maybe if it wasn't limited by the one sentence challenge, it would have seemed more realistic. As it is, some of the lines are very good, very evocative - I particularly liked Music - and others just come off as awkward, trying to fit too much into a single sentence.
swabloo chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
ooh, that was damn cool. and VERY interesting
aisarete chapter 1 . 12/1/2007
Any awards you win are very well-deserved.

Psydeum H chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
...I'm at a loss, not really sure how to feel. *Uncertainty* Uhm, I enjoyed reading certainly, but ended up somewhat uncomfortable, more because of how suddenly the smut came than anything else... In the end, very nice fic. Applause for crossing two very good series. *uneasy smile*
demented cookies chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Wow! I love His Dark Materials! I wrote a crossover for it, too, but mine sucked. :P