|Reviews for Frayed Reasons|
| AmQaudrus chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
| Krizzie Cruz chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
great story... kinda sad though but great portrayal of wanted emotions at right times
| drawingdownthemoon chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
wow, tht was so messd up-but in a good way, lol.
| Purplecherry5 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
No! Poor Sakura! Another story well writtin though. Stupid (mummbels somethings) Oro-bastard! Oh well...as long as that doesn't happen in the REAl story...Purplecherry5~Naoko-chan
| punkassnigga chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
I love Immortal Rain! I'm just pissed that it takes so long for the next book to come out! I found the art and Storyline equally awesome, tell your sister that!
| nazzy and jerkez chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
SAD! Really sad! Although i admire you for writing such a thing.
Feel sorry for Sasuke. And Sakura. And everyone else.
| psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
I liked it. I really did. The angst, and the descriptions-all so very well-placed and nicely done. Especially the first few descriptions on how everyone was looking for Sakura-that paragraph where everyone's usual hobbies and doings were being abandoned for the sake of the church-I loved that.
As usual, brilliant idea, made beautiful with your equally brilliant writing. Good job!
(Yes, its a little gory, but its SasuSaku. Their angst goes good with gore. Yosh.)
| schadenfreude-reality chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Aw FU*K. Thats DISGUSTING. Good story and all but *vomit*. That's just WRONG. Eh I'm shivering in disgust! I even cursed! Thats not normal you know. I prefer to be civilized at all times. But that was amazingly disturbing. If it were more gory and didn't contain the whole cannibalism concept I would've loved it. But eh eating another person doesn't sit well with me so your story remains at the 'like' level. I do like it though. But cannibalism...*runs away*. Good work though.
| Night Audinwood chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
One of the best one-shots I've ever read. I loved the descriptions and the detail, and it was very well-written. A lot better than most of the things I've ever written ; The ending was definatley unexpected, but it made the story that much better (if that even makes sense, it sounds better in my head, lol). Keep up the great work!
| andonlyif chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Horrifyingly beautiful. Suspenseful and beautiful, there's nothing else to say...
Izzy-chan the Disturbing
| Haberdashery75 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
now you just utterly amazed/scared me even more. i just finished watching a horror movie and then read this. but screw that, i love the angst. and it was so sweet as well (in some weird way)! XD
| ViLaVi chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Aw how sad, nicely written though
| iMissa chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Oh man, that is some major angst right there. It's really rather touching, too, in a morbid way. Anyway, I absolutely loved it! Poor Sasuke, I feel so bad. Great job!
| Blu Rose chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
So sad... And yet I loved it! The ending was a little gross, but not horror movie gross or anything. Great job! (Adds to her favorites)
| HyperMM chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Ok maybe you should put a warning on it for not reading after eating.
Amazing imagery I could literally feel the images popping out at me. Great angst. Ugh you made me cry.
Keep up the awesome work.