Reviews for Frayed Reasons
AmQaudrus chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Krizzie Cruz chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
great story... kinda sad though but great portrayal of wanted emotions at right times
drawingdownthemoon chapter 1 . 10/12/2007
wow, tht was so messd up-but in a good way, lol.

happy unbirthday

Purplecherry5 chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
No! Poor Sakura! Another story well writtin though. Stupid (mummbels somethings) Oro-bastard! Oh long as that doesn't happen in the REAl story...Purplecherry5~Naoko-chan
punkassnigga chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
I love Immortal Rain! I'm just pissed that it takes so long for the next book to come out! I found the art and Storyline equally awesome, tell your sister that!

nazzy and jerkez chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
SAD! Really sad! Although i admire you for writing such a thing.

Feel sorry for Sasuke. And Sakura. And everyone else.

psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 2/20/2007
I liked it. I really did. The angst, and the descriptions-all so very well-placed and nicely done. Especially the first few descriptions on how everyone was looking for Sakura-that paragraph where everyone's usual hobbies and doings were being abandoned for the sake of the church-I loved that.

As usual, brilliant idea, made beautiful with your equally brilliant writing. Good job!

(Yes, its a little gory, but its SasuSaku. Their angst goes good with gore. Yosh.)
schadenfreude-reality chapter 1 . 1/20/2007
Aw FU*K. Thats DISGUSTING. Good story and all but *vomit*. That's just WRONG. Eh I'm shivering in disgust! I even cursed! Thats not normal you know. I prefer to be civilized at all times. But that was amazingly disturbing. If it were more gory and didn't contain the whole cannibalism concept I would've loved it. But eh eating another person doesn't sit well with me so your story remains at the 'like' level. I do like it though. But cannibalism...*runs away*. Good work though.

Atra Nox
Night Audinwood chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
One of the best one-shots I've ever read. I loved the descriptions and the detail, and it was very well-written. A lot better than most of the things I've ever written ; The ending was definatley unexpected, but it made the story that much better (if that even makes sense, it sounds better in my head, lol). Keep up the great work!



andonlyif chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Horrifyingly beautiful. Suspenseful and beautiful, there's nothing else to say...


Izzy-chan the Disturbing
Haberdashery75 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
now you just utterly amazed/scared me even more. i just finished watching a horror movie and then read this. but screw that, i love the angst. and it was so sweet as well (in some weird way)! XD
ViLaVi chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Aw how sad, nicely written though
iMissa chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
Oh man, that is some major angst right there. It's really rather touching, too, in a morbid way. Anyway, I absolutely loved it! Poor Sasuke, I feel so bad. Great job!
Blu Rose chapter 1 . 1/16/2007
So sad... And yet I loved it! The ending was a little gross, but not horror movie gross or anything. Great job! (Adds to her favorites)
HyperMM chapter 1 . 1/16/2007

Ok maybe you should put a warning on it for not reading after eating.

Amazing imagery I could literally feel the images popping out at me. Great angst. Ugh you made me cry.

Keep up the awesome work.
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