Reviews for Shadows Within the Light
Delta99 chapter 1 . 7/31
Just a random thought, but what would happen if Harry/Shadow took a polyjuice potion that had the hair of a really healthy person? Would he still have his injuries or would he be temporarily healed?
dtplater chapter 55 . 6/17
I think I would have enjoyed this story alot more if you hadn't used such a stupid name. Seriously 'Shadow'is a ridiculous name even for a wizard.
SkyeMoor chapter 41 . 6/1
Too slytherin - had to stay to watch...
SkyeMoor chapter 19 . 5/31
Am enjoying the maneuvering, and the relationships too.
SkyeMoor chapter 11 . 5/27
Well done, and back in the thick of things.
A Lonely Rainbow Girl chapter 5 . 5/7
Bwa ha ha ha ha I ship it. I soooooo ship it.
Guest chapter 64 . 5/3

H was shaking
* He

his anorexic body
* emaciated (anorexic refers to an eating disorder)

space to dark
* too
Guest chapter 63 . 5/3
The battle with the ghosts made almost no sense.


Chapter 61:
* stated

Chapter 62:
this. . Hogwarts
* this. Hogwarts

glad your back,"
* glad you're back,"

who's will
* whose will

Chapter 63:
* soothe

more surly than the runic circle.
* surely

* Wofsbane

These thing take time."
* things
Guest chapter 62 . 5/2
The balance all going to go since made almost no sen
Guest chapter 61 . 5/2
I wondered if the elder wand was going to come back into the story.
Guest chapter 60 . 5/2
I expected more action in the bank. But it's okay.

Typo: mussel
* muzzle
Guest chapter 59 . 5/2

continue uncheck.
* unchecked.

In other words, it's pack.
* its

last of it's influences over him.
* its influence over him.

* secretly

Guest chapter 58 . 5/1

they cow-towed.
* kowtowed
This is one of those typos that made me laugh my ass off. Hilarity is the one redeeming quality of FF typos.

* rigid (blanket correction for entire story)

wasn't fairing well.

Its so dark
* It's
Guest chapter 57 . 4/30

as if nothing had happen,
* happened,

* clammed

flooded trough the
* through
Guest chapter 56 . 4/30
His parents' torturer is his friend? Isn't it s bit odd that he doesn't seem to mind?


in anyway I can.
* in any way I can.

tuffs on his ears
* tufts

* encasing

for a weak.
* week
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