Reviews for Shadows Within the Light
zara chapter 55 . 5/12/2019
yet again nevi;le is so unnevilley. it almost feels manufactured when remus says "he's like a son to me" because i cannot recall any of that father/son development, and i just don't recall neville in general due to his fake-nevilleness. sometimes he's a perfect neville, that's great; other times im confused. and i cant even point out a single thing that makes him unnevilley, its just a feeling.

oh well. confused about rodolphus. didnt that dude torture nev's parents?

great chapter as always 3

~zooz
zara chapter 51 . 5/9/2019
my vote wont count since this was written in Ye Emo Ages of Olde but i hope that they can communicate with eachother somehow!
zara chapter 46 . 5/9/2019
Severus is shit
Severus is absolute shit
Severus is shit
Let's throw him into a pit
Snivellus is crap
Snivellus is absolute crap
Snivellus is crap
In his ass we'll pop a cap
Snape is fuckin' turds
Snape is an absolute turd
Snape is fuckin' turds
Let's call him all the curse words

My educational song about Snivellus Snake, the worst person on earth. I will hate him always and forever. Thank you, thank you!

- zany
zara chapter 45 . 5/9/2019
i'm late but please please please don't make her just a background character, she's adorable. i'm torn between b, c, d, and e - maybe B and E, or B and D? lol, the votes over so idk why im debating.

-Znorlax
zara chapter 39 . 5/8/2019
oh no neville... i love luna but poor ginny! lol how about luna x ginny? dont really care about this neville's feelings sorry dude. i know its too late to vote but im really praying for luna x ginny.
zara chapter 36 . 5/8/2019
you know what? i take it back. snape is shit. this snape is shit. all snapes are shit. there is no incarnation of Snivellus Shite that i will enjoy. no ifs ands or buts. thank you.

-ZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZCZ
zara chapter 33 . 5/8/2019
i dont know how i feel about seph. i miss Boy's childlike behaviour and how sweet he was - especially how he was developing. i know i keep reviewing the wrong chapters lol, sorry. but yeah, seph is gonna be an interesting twist! the therapy is honestly my favourite part of this story... with the drarry alongside, of course.

-Zooper Dooper
Zara chapter 30 . 5/7/2019
i've said it before and i'll say it again (before completing the chapter) neville is SO unnevilley. jesus fekken christ man. he just feels so distant and alien from canon neville. but w/e. i forgot to review last chappie and i cant be bothered to go back again, but I AM SO HAPPY ABOUT BOY. BOY IS MY FAVOURITE, I LOVE HIM SO MUCH!

-zzzzzzzzz
Zara chapter 25 . 5/7/2019
who was sirius in love with? i know remus is dating tonks in this fic but i am an unabashed wolfstar shipper. at least a hint? the tiniest niggle? please?

-Aussie Zaussie
zara chapter 21 . 5/7/2019
neville just feels un-nevilley in this story. i cant vibe with him. that makes me sound like a hippie flowerguy from the sixties but it's true. still hate snape but this ver. is okay. EXTREMELY EXTREMELY happy about the boy development. boy is my fav. i love boy.

-Zebra
zara chapter 20 . 5/7/2019
jesus christ, for someone who's an empath, shadow certainly has no empathy for Boy. fekkin hell Shazz get your life together!

-zap
Zara chapter 19 . 5/7/2019
Poll's over,, but I'm love-love-loving A B and C. Also some E, but not as much as the first three.

-Ziggy
zara chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
god i just want some healing for boy... i love him and he deserves the world! doesnt have to be merging, just more of the sirius therapy? a little happiness? hes a human too and for him to have all that suffering... god.

~Zing Zang Zoop
Guest chapter 3 . 3/8/2019
Came back to re read this and I am loving it! Also lol, Grindlwald had Heterochromia, and it was Johnny Depp’s idea!
Kyleelouise22 chapter 57 . 2/7/2019
Aww Neville is part of his pack now
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