Oh my god love Draco’s form and what it means though I really think Draco should read it as I think it would do him good and help him feel more calm about his destiny and how he is handling he love and his 2 sides.

Please tell me your not going to kill Neville I am at the part where he is talking to Remus and it is giving me this really bad feeling that he is going to be really badly hurt or killed and I really don’t want that to happen.

Yah they saved Draco and shadow has fully excepted that he not only loves Draco but that Draco deserves that love by having to face how much Draco has proven his love is true and trustworthy shadow now sees that Draco deserves to be love equally in return and that shadow wants to be the one to do that.

Wow I am happy that Severus made up with Draco and I like that shadow stood up to his uncontrolled anger I am a little worried about Neville with shadow being gay but I can understand that he was hurt and raped in a more full on way then shadow and because he is straight his adversion to a romanTic relationship with a man could be harder to understand though I hope he realises how hard shadow is struggling with this and that shadow isn’t straight and doesn’t like girls at all in a romantic scents and that Draco truly makes shadow happy and makes him feel safe.

Oh no as much as I like seph I miss shadow and know he doesn’t know his dad is alive I also am shocked at how Severus handled things with Draco and seph I hope shadow lets him know that was not ok I also hope that Neville is ok to.

Oh my god the last chapter with Severus going through the veil almost killed me I really think if he had really been gone I would have not been able to kept reading but with seph saving him and learning more about shadow I think he will want to merge so he can have and experience the good not just the bad now he knows that they do have good to look forward to and I hope seph saving Severus will make shadow more ok with the idea of merging with seph to now he knows that seph is not bad like either demon or boy were. Yay mad eye is gone. And I so loved the kiss between Draco and shadow that was amazing and so real and beautiful.

Ok so Ron hermione and Ginny are really annoying me now something has to give and they either have to wake up and change or shadow has to tell them where to go because they keep repeatedly treating him like dirt and I have had enough oh I know maybe seph can tell them where to go that might wake them up. One can dream

Oh my god I love how you chose to incorporate boy and demon and make them seph I think it’s brilliant and I think it is interesting how this personality will turn out and how Draco is definitely the cause of this happening and the one that seph is bonded to and trust and I do believe it is through shadows love of Draco that boy could trust Draco and therefore demon could trust Draco which in turn made seph trust Draco so brilliant

Ok go with me on this since the chapter with the centaur I have a feeling the thing shadow needs to do to be on the right path is expect Draco love and his love for Draco as this love is the only thing that will tame demon and allow him to fully merge with shadow and allow him to really defeat Tom I am only about a quarter way through this chapter but I need to get it out there that I really think that’s what the centaur meant with his warning to shadow and why he arranged it so that Draco would be jealous and that shadow would find out that Draco does love him and therefore prompt him into faces his love for Draco and get them together.

Oh my god I love the faceted that shadow is discovering his feelings for Draco is such a natural way I also think it is great how you have set it up that Draco would not try and be the dominant partner and there for would not bring out shadows fear of not being in control. I also love what you did with boy and how he responded to Draco with an almost natural trust because of shadows feelings for Draco are so strong that they have managed to reach him. I also find it fascinating how you have managed to make so that it is believable that demon could be changing and evolving enough that he could be intergrated with shadow as I fully believed that he was going to have to be removed before but now I see how shadows personality being almost whole now giving him more power and strength to not be over taking by demon and the side effect of demon being in the room beside boys and hearing and learning to empathise with boys pain in focusing in destructive nature to only hurting those who hurt him boy and also because the almost whole shadow is filtering down his care and protectiveness of the people he has come to love demon is also slowly learning that not everything should be destroyed only that which hurts itself boy shadow and anyone shadow loves or cares about. Plus with shadow being so strong in his morals I believe that demon could actually be a very healthy addition to shadows psyche just like boy would it may not be comfortable or even a very happy experience to have to deal with his anger and hate and darkness or his fear and pain and despair but he will in the end be much healthier and more able to deal with life. Just like merging with kit is not a very fun experience but it is healthy as it allows him the chance to process the pain and trumor so he can have a normal loving relationship without being afraid of being hurt again. This a brilliant and something that I didn’t think was possible but am loving that it is also I love that it is going to be Harry that makes the first realities of his feelings for Draco though I do believe that Draco might already realise that he cares for Harry more then normal but is suppressing it because he doesn’t want to ruin his friendship with shadow but I bet when shadow finally admits that he likes him he will responded with a I reaction of already having feelings for shadow himself.

Shadow threw a fit about how Sirius just needs to be his friend and not make decisions for him but Shadow just sits there when Sirius goes bat shit about and attacks his father? Then smiles fondly when Sirius is going ham about the whole thing even after it happens? Sirius needs another talking to apparently because it's seriously annoying me that he's just getting away with this stuff. Acting like he's an over grown child and coddling him than telling him to grow the fuck up and realize that his fathering time is long over and Shadow can make his own decisions.

me encanta tu historia escribe muchas cosas mas en el futuro!

What about Dudley?

Will draco ever realize that his the only one who sees seraphim the same way tony stark saw hulk? And that shadow sees seraphim the same negative way banner sees hulk?

Hey, so I don’t want to sound like a complete asshole, or anything... but could you maybe put up a trigger warning for aromantic/asexual people in the beginning of his chapter? I 100% agree that Harry isn’t Ace or any form of it, and that his hesitancy has to do with trauma, but as a recently decided ace person, this talk hit me pretty hard, especially since I wasn’t expecting it (particularly this paragraph:
“No." Severus shook his head. "You know that is not what I am saying. I'm saying that it is a psychological and biological need for humans to search for a companion, and that loving relationships, healthy relationships, are essential for our wellbeing. Even if such relationships were to end badly, they are worth it. Of course, unhealthy or abusive relationships are not good, but that is not what we are talking about here. You know that.")
Again, I totally know that Harry isn’t ace or anything, and that it’s not necessarily your job to put trigger warnings out or anything, but this one def. hit a bit too close to home on a trigger I didn’t realize I had. (I hope this isn’t coming out as agressive or annoying or anything.)

Thank you for taking the time to read (and possibly act on) this, I’m really enjoying your story!
Lots of love
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