|Reviews for Jade|
| Daniel1996 chapter 5 . 4/24/2013
| obsessivereader95 chapter 5 . 11/1/2011
yay! i love it! i read "red," too, but i didn't remember a few details. great stories! XD
| willotaku9000 chapter 5 . 8/10/2011
I really liked the story, felt the ending was a bit...well...I thought the story could go on for a few more chapters, but I loved the story all the same.
| WalkerOfTheWheel chapter 4 . 3/23/2010
Have to say this now, just as I finished reading this chapter, my iPod decides to play Village Lantern by Blackmore's Night. Unless you've heard it, you have no idea how fitting that is.
Now for more serious matters. I like your stories. Solid plot, characterization, grammar, name it. But there is something about your style that bugs me. There is a disjointed feel to it, lacking in transitions. The image doesn't move smoothly within the scenes. Scene breaks are fine, its the internal motions that need work. I'll continue reading more of your work as I have seen a definite improvement in that area as your work progresses and render a final verdict in one of your later tales. Until then, keep the wheel turning.
| LoveBassClarinet chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
I liked the story and its prequel. It was an interesting take. I don't know where you find all these amazing ideas and find the time to write them up so well.
Defenestration is now my new favorite word ;)
Keep up the good stories, I thoroughly enjoy reading them.
Just one question though... where did the title name fit into this one?
| Denalien chapter 5 . 11/26/2009
Ohhw that was a 'cute' story...i liked it!
| Behind The Disguises chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
So I haven't read a decent TT fanfiction story for a few years now. Yesterday, I sad down and read 'RED' and 'JADE' in one day, and I have come to a conclusion: You are my literary soulmate.
Seriously. Excellent plot, witty dialogue, romance, humor, action, refreshingly different yet accurate portrayal of the characters, and, of course, a healthy dose of Raveast.
My new favorite line of all time is officially "Your eyes...they're luminous yet dark pools of grape soda."
CalliopeMused, you just got a new fan.
| purplerave chapter 5 . 4/5/2008
I'm not quite sure what happened at the end, but still this was great! I loved it. I kinda wish the sequal was longer, but it's your story and it ended up doing just fine, in my opinion. Can't wait to read some more of your stuff!
| suzako chapter 5 . 10/14/2007
Ah, love this story! I've never seen the characters so IC before! BBRae! RobStar! CyJinx! All my favourite pairings! It's so sad it has ended, but I am glad you wrote it_
| wanderingwarrior chapter 5 . 9/2/2007
UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE!
| VeelaChic chapter 5 . 6/14/2007
Very very very very very very very SUPERB! But wait, they never caught Deathstroke, atleast...I dont think they did. Very good however ]
| BLIvorySS chapter 5 . 4/25/2007
Hurrah! What a great ending, so happy and...yeah, I love when everything works out:D. I really liked that Raven took them all to meet her emotions, it worked as a way to show that she's becoming closer to the team.
Anyways, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!
| BLIvorySS chapter 4 . 4/25/2007
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed how Logan talked down demonic Raven, it was really well written and tense. Great job, as usual!
| random girl chapter 5 . 4/24/2007
A thoroughly enjoyable story. Your writing style was engaging and your characters well rounded. My only complaint is that you seemed to have dropped a few plot points from the first part of the story to the second, but nothing majorly important. I hope you do write another story within this universe, becuase I think it has a lot of potential left.
| BLIvorySS chapter 3 . 4/22/2007
Wow, sorry it's been so long for me since I got around to reviewing this chapter! Midterms kind of took me out of action for a while:D. Anyways, really awesome chapter, loved the mysterious undertones throughout. I'm very intrigued as to what it is Raven is hiding.
Well, guess I'll have to read on to find out...