Reviews for Foolproof
EmbersOfAmber chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
*nodding approval* Three cheers for swoon-inducing Kenshin!
TricksterBoo chapter 1 . 1/31/2007
Loved the ending! Awesome one-shot!
Doctor Kiba chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Nice... I love the story and how you ended it
kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
the caress of his eyes... very sensual

the interaction of kaoru and sano was comfortable, cute and pretty much in character, imo (although i think kaoru would have belted him and chased him down to clobber him some more for squirting her).

thank you,

Mossy Tea chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
I love the way that Kenshin always manuevers her into a corner. He's such a stalker. P
openwindow3 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007

this was freaking AWESOME!
Chikai Tenshi chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
So glad I found this fic! Cute story and I love the banter between Sano and Kaoru.
midnight000shadow chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
man...dat was freamig awesome haha i luv the banter...u should write sum full blown stories man...ot would be awesome
abubi-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
ohohoho... is this finished? darn, i loved it! there should be a sequel! well whatever you're going to do, more power to you!

sakurachan101 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
aww... i absolutely luv ur short stories! keep writing more, onegai?

hmm... if kaoru's the vice-captain, is kenshin the captain?
skenshingumi chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Kenshin certainly wasn't shy in this meeting. Sounds like Kaoru's clothes will steam dry.

I love the banter between Sano and Kaoru. It felt so natural in terms of their characters and in terms of your modern setting. There were so many lines that I loved that I am going to cite some of my favorites here.

S: “Really, Jou-chan! When have I ever steered you wrong by accident?”

K: “If you think about what you just said, I’m sure you’ll understand why I have a hard time believing anything you say when it comes to guys.”

S: “And here I thought you were just craving the fine pleasure of my company. I feel so used.”

S: “What have I ever done that makes you think you can’t trust me to be a man of my word?”

K:“Most of the years of my life come to mind,” she muttered under her breath.

S: “It doesn’t count until you’re twenty,” he insisted with a broader, entirely unrepentant grin. “That other stuff was building character in your developmental years.”

You did a great job developing a relaxed and humorous dialog between them.
AkaiOnna chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I love all your stories! XD
MikaylaMae chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
That is just great! (I'd use a better word, but I don't have access to my thesaurus right now, sorry!) Wonderfully written!
san.fae chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
ah! x] this your best story yet. my dream at the present is to become as wonderful a writer as you are.
keigojin chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I loved it, the dynamics are great. Write more damn you
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