|Reviews for Foolproof|
| Doctor Kiba chapter 1 . 1/30/2007
Nice... I love the story and how you ended it
| kokoronagomu chapter 1 . 1/26/2007
the caress of his eyes... very sensual
the interaction of kaoru and sano was comfortable, cute and pretty much in character, imo (although i think kaoru would have belted him and chased him down to clobber him some more for squirting her).
| Mossy Tea chapter 1 . 1/24/2007
I love the way that Kenshin always manuevers her into a corner. He's such a stalker. P
| openwindow3 chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
this was freaking AWESOME!
| Chikai Tenshi chapter 1 . 1/22/2007
So glad I found this fic! Cute story and I love the banter between Sano and Kaoru.
| midnight000shadow chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
man...dat was freamig awesome haha i luv the banter...u should write sum full blown stories man...ot would be awesome
| abubi-chan chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
ohohoho... is this finished? darn, i loved it! there should be a sequel! well whatever you're going to do, more power to you!
| sakurachan101 chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
aww... i absolutely luv ur short stories! keep writing more, onegai?
hmm... if kaoru's the vice-captain, is kenshin the captain?
| skenshingumi chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Kenshin certainly wasn't shy in this meeting. Sounds like Kaoru's clothes will steam dry.
I love the banter between Sano and Kaoru. It felt so natural in terms of their characters and in terms of your modern setting. There were so many lines that I loved that I am going to cite some of my favorites here.
S: “Really, Jou-chan! When have I ever steered you wrong by accident?”
K: “If you think about what you just said, I’m sure you’ll understand why I have a hard time believing anything you say when it comes to guys.”
S: “And here I thought you were just craving the fine pleasure of my company. I feel so used.”
S: “What have I ever done that makes you think you can’t trust me to be a man of my word?”
K:“Most of the years of my life come to mind,” she muttered under her breath.
S: “It doesn’t count until you’re twenty,” he insisted with a broader, entirely unrepentant grin. “That other stuff was building character in your developmental years.”
You did a great job developing a relaxed and humorous dialog between them.
| AkaiOnna chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I love all your stories! XD
| MikaylaMae chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
That is just great! (I'd use a better word, but I don't have access to my thesaurus right now, sorry!) Wonderfully written!
| san.fae chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
ah! x] this your best story yet. my dream at the present is to become as wonderful a writer as you are.
| keigojin chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
I loved it, the dynamics are great. Write more damn you
| Anonymous but very interested chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
Anotehr well-written piece from you. _ I enjoyed reading this one. Kenshin definitely seems to have been keeping an eye on Kaoru for some time.
That last line was a wonderful way to end it. Especially the "Vice-Captain". Kenshin sounds quite confident...
Thanks for posting!
| Shadow Girl chapter 1 . 1/17/2007
That was so funny. And the way Kaoru reacted... that was priceless! I'd like to see what happens next... if there is a next chapter, of course! :D