spatterson chapter 1 . 9/27/2013
Actually, Merryweather is the blue fairy. And Fauna is the green fairy.
howlsatthemoon chapter 1 . 9/21/2009
Poorly written. Confusing. Serious gaps in the storyline, and a few spelling errors. Also, under the wrong category.

I'm sorry if this is offending to you, but it's what every writer needs to face. If you fix some of these problems you could be a pretty good author.
SoUsay234 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
Hey... um? You do realize this is under the wrong category, don't you? And I would recommend you to get a beta there are some serious lagoons in your plot and the dialogue is kinda corny
Bookmarked chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
um...basically i didn't read it, but one thing i know is that this belongs with another category.
the one who breathes nitrogen chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
Uhm... I don't want to hurt your feelings, but this is the totally the wrong category. I. HATE. THAT.

Anyway... it wasn't that great anyway... and I don't see the point of this thing. It was confusing. Sorry. And bad. Sorry. Don't feel bad.
Desepere Romantique chapter 1 . 8/22/2007 realize that you put this under 'Witch of Blackbird Pond' right?

it should really go to Fairy Tales with all the others...
SockMonkey101 chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
Umm...what? Maybe I wasn't paying attention, but I have no idea what's going on here. And what does this have to do with 'The Witch of Blackbird Pond'?


So take it off, maybe get a beta reader to look over it, and post it in the Sleeping Beauty catagory. Please.
Sir-Not-Appearing-In-This-Show chapter 1 . 4/8/2007

Wrong catagory.

And kinda dull. Not bad just...dull.
Code Ragnarok chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Wow. Not only is this... poorly written, but also in the wrong category.