|Reviews for how could you|
| MEBEINGME chapter 2 . 10/14/2016
OMMMGGGGG willyou be updating this story soon? pretty pleaseeeee? but will that be from this account or your new one?
LOVE THE STORY BTW
| undernarutosbed chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
woah... gurl, ur fetish is the exact the same thing as mine hahahaahha
| May chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Not bad. It was good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
awesome love it
| YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 1 . 6/30/2016
Okay, I just can't. There is absolutely no punctuation in half of these sentences. It's just one bit thrown together paragraph and it freaking sucks. I can also do without the side commentary. if you decide to rewrite this you can let me know if you wish but I'm not reading this as it is.
| WTF chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Ever heard of a thing called paragraph because it makes it really hard to focus.
| alzubaidyreem chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
I have a similar fetish i love forcful and violent in smex but it needs to be con sensual like they both loving each other ... And i just love it when the seem is possesev and into punishing he uke for trying to top
| gay god chapter 2 . 1/2/2016
Make another fucking story dame
| cum dump chapter 2 . 11/21/2015
If you dont hurry the fuck up and make another one i will rape you bitch
| chibinaruxsasu chapter 2 . 9/14/2015
THAT WAS SOME SHIT BUT I LIKED IT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS STORY I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT X3 I LUV SASUNARU NARUSASU
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Hey girl...can't you use 'space'? It looks like the words are in a traffic jam! And next time, please try to use punctuation- I can't understand the lines :3
| guest chapter 2 . 5/26/2015
R u going to make more
| Y.A.O.I chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
I LIKE RAPE ASWELL SOO do you think you can change my thoughts by writing a obito and nagato rape i'll be waiting
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
you should add more sex and add kids well bye
| mekmvkfjkjfnjdsn chapter 1 . 8/21/2014