|Reviews for A Friend in the Dark|
| StrainAsylum chapter 1 . 4/18/2019
| Reading-Stories-Only chapter 1 . 2/7/2017
1. Is the concussed person staying awake thing really a myth? I would like to get my facts straight.
2. Once the patient is awake the breathing tube HAS to be taken out because of gag-reflex. But while they are unconscious, their gag-reflex is not present, so the tube can be in.
Over all... GREAT STORY!
| bec chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Loved every word.
| Aileil chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Hemorrhagic shock is caused by a traumatic injury. Hypovolemic shock is caused by internal bleeding only. So really he should have suffered from both. Just a random thing I learned yesterday and really wanted to tell someone so you just happened to be the person unlucky enough to have written a story that I could apply my newfound info to. I must say, I really like your story a good deal. I've been weeding out my favorites so I can have a shorter list that is easier for me to navigate, and I ran across your story again and I still really like it. It is a bit sadder than I like but you wrote it quite well. Thanks.
| PBIceCream chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Excellent, thank you!
| Vanidot chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Wonderful story even though it made me cry! Thanks for Posting!
| RozaHathoway chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
OMJ I LOVE THIS STORY! :P
| Daniel Addiction chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Really great story, enjoyed reading it a lot. :)
| Vampy chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
aw... such a touching story. It chipped all the way through to my heart. :D Jack's awesome here! Daniels very much in character. Too bad Teal'c doesn't say/do much. And I loved the Sam/Daniel chatter, not too much chatter, interesting facts, it was just right! Good job. Write lots more! ;) V.
| Bettlebug chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
A touching story. I am glad Daniel survived in the end. I might have cried otherwise. Poor Jack. Hopefully he will mend his relationship with Daniel now, seeing as he got a look into the brilliant mind of Daniel Jackson.
| zookitty chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
this was an amazing story! so well written and very well thought out! it was captivating and moving and the ending rocked! great job! you definatly have a talent for writting!
| Call Me Sarah chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Great job! Is there a sequel?
| bluedragon1836 chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
I loved it. You are a good story teller.
| rider-of-snakes chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
EXCELLENT! I loved it! It was well written, and I didn't see hardly any mistakes. Keep it up!
| devianttart chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I somehow missed this one. Sorry about that. You know I love your stuff. Anyway, great story. Nice way to deal with a story line I never really understood (why D & J were so mean to each other in seasons 4-5.)